The Worlds To Ascension

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JenniferG

very recommended if you don't care much about grammar. writing style is different for me. MC is not a chosen one, ah! can you believe that? hope very much for thousands of chapters, soon.

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king851274

It is a very good concept and the writing quality is amazing but the one thing that is holding me back from putting a five is the fact that there aren't enough chapters soo..... I might change this where there are enough

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Dao_of_mischeif

Honestly I love the novel like the idea but the Grammer thought it is ruining the story so much it would be better if u get someone to write the story for u while u talk or get an editor to rewrite the chapter after u write it to help with the grammar mistakes. Thx

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Rauwynt

I’m confused why this novel does get so little attention. If you’re looking for an interesting system and fantasy novel with a well thought out world background and story progression, you will find it here. There are already over 100 chapters and like every novel without a contract it‘s free, so why don‘t you just try it? Some people might find it off putting to read, because the grammar isn‘t the best. And i can understand that, but why don’t you just read over it? I mean, if you are speaking/writing with a non-native english speaker(like myself), who isn’t totally proficient in the language, but enough to communicate with, you will also just skim over the mistakes, because it’s meaning is understandable. Summary: Good points - already has many chapters; good world background and story progression; decent mc and character development; it’s free Bad point - grammar isn‘t good(some people might find it harder to immerse themself in the story, but it’s definitely good enough to understand everything) At last an advice, if you aren’t into different power/cultivating systems then this might not be something for you, but read for yourself to know better(not few system novels have several power/cultivating systems like mana, ki, etc.). Just try it and have a nice day readers!

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Lonnie_Barrar

It is a very good concept and the writing quality is amazing....... more chapters plz i love this story..................................................

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Lonnie_Barrar

great story i love the way you made the mc ....im siting here hoping there is more...............................................................................................................................................................

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sreekrishnan_prem

Pretty good story more chapter required daily more more chapters story of brother sister relationship is pretty good pretty good the novel worthy to be read can help but admire it

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Undead_Tai

Well, I am going to tell you all honestly, I am not very good at English, and before this is also write another story called [Summoned hero but slightly different] but after changing device I forget my password of that ID, so I start writing this one with a brand new account. But I think I am a lot better then before and if no one believes me then you can check [Summoned hero but slightly different] and you will understand what I mean...................................

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king851274

Grammar is still a bit off but so far the story itself is good. __________________________________________________________________________________________________

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BIGPP_smallpp

Everything is going good till now... the world development and mysterious origins, makes me want to know the end. I hope author dont reveal mysteries early.. Good lluck for the novel