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The mc is reincarnated randomly in twilight with wishes to see how he survives in the world which the characters used to irritate him he is reincarnated as Bella's older twin brother.
To all readers, English is not my first language and it's my first time writing and please don't curse my grammar sucks
and I am writing for fun and mc met with a kind god there are multiple gods who watch people going through reincarnation so he is lucky he got multiple wishes and he is not op at first but will become as he goes on.This also has bashing involved so for those don't like it you have been warned.
The cover does not belong to me it belongs to the creator.
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I'm liking the story so far very few people have stuff updating I do hope author looks at my comment on his latest chapter on the last paragraph I put some suggestions I think would help
This is a really good book at first I was kind of skeptical but then I ended up really liking you I couldn’t help but think wow that’s great and I hope the author doesn’t stop writing it because it’s extremely cool, though the grammar needs some tlc.
Just an honest and realist review ... For any guys, this fanfic in english is just terrible, google trad is better that this. Reading this make me sick .. . Otherwise, story is classic enough ... just see where this is going, when there will be more chapter. **: This is a fanfic and should be in the fanfic section 😒
REALLY really Really Really Great 👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌 Keep up the good work 👍👌👏👏👌👍👏👏👍👍👏👍👏👍👌👏👌👍👌👏👌👌👍👌👌👌
The story is really good, it showed me different outcomes of the canon characters actions. Furthermore, it’s a reincarnation fic with the MC’s romantic interest being Rosalie
so far one of the best I have seen. great story 👏, can't wait for more, hope you keep up with new chapters 😀 🧒✌😊😊😊😊📔📔📔📔📔📔📔📔📔📔
This has been the only twilight fanfic That i like so far. Youre taKing your chaRactEers seRiously and giving a differNt POV to The story as apposed to just chaNging ghe mC Name and genDer and then telLing yhe original story word for word. keep up tHe good worK, Im LookIng forwaRd to more
I enjoyed it very much. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Writing Quality: 3 stars, its readable but there are too many mistakes, not using a period or having some words stuck together. Stability of Updates: 5 stars, the story is already finished so you wouldn't have to worry about any updates, though the first 20 chaps are really long which is nice. Story Development: 5 stars, I like the development, some would say that the story progressed too fast however you gotta remember that the whole novel is 52chaps and not 300+. this novel is simply written for people to enjoy/read in a day. Character Design: 5 stars, if were talking about all characters then i think they're all written correctly, idk about how they are in the original novel but as far as i read from other fanfics/movies i think author did a good job. mc's personality not bad.👍 World Background: 4 stars, everything is the same as the movie however there are some nice twists here and there, though I think the story about how the first vampire/werewolf/shifters were created was a bit lackluster or better said boring that's why 4 stars. Also author kept mentioning the first werewolf and that mc was supposed to kill him, but that never happened. If I have to give author any tips it would be to try and fix your grammar, even if its not your main language you could still do better in writing, you don't use any question marks/ exclamation marks/ period, you also forget to put spaces a lot of times. Anyway thanks for the nice fanfic author and I hope you write another one in the same world soon.
I like the story but reading it makes me feel dyslexic. Do not read if you cant handle extremely bad grammar and spelling mistakes in almost every sentence.
Not a quality ff, and the first chapters Are rushed, too OP, without much explanation. It seems to me the author wanted to add all the fun things at the same time so he could write his own story in the twilight universe. I mean, that's ff so we can't be too demanding. But as a STORY and not just ff I think the author need to rewrite a bit. It has potential, and if in the futur the author try to ameliorate his/ her writing quality, the backroung and character design, I will read it with delight ! Thank you for trying. Good luck.
come on author please continue this novel cause it's really good 😸 plus I've read some of your other work as well and it's looking pretty good keep up the good work 👌👌👌👍💯👏👏
The story is just incredibly interesting, I reread it several times, I really like everything, only the chapters, if possible, would come out more often.
Anglais terrible Do you know reverso ? Translate site you should go check it . Sinon je trouve la fic gâcher par le dégoût envers René c'est quoi ta haine gratuite frere elle a rien fait la dame Ta fic mérite pas un 4 étoiles plutôt un 3 étoiles
haven't read it I'm just giving a review based on the overall reviews, and I noticed someone gave you a one star over I assume grammar/spelling so this should balance it out decently mate
Reveal Spoiler so any updates on this or have you dropped it .....📔📃📒📓🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🧒🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👀👀👀👀👀
I am just a shameless writer rating my own fanfic i just wants people to read my fanfic and tell me what they think and as i said above its my first time writing so please go easy on me