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One day, Zhang Dongyun transmigrates with the Impenetrable Fortress System.
As the Fortress Lord, he is invincible within the boundaries of the fortress, and he controls the fates of everyone inside. Nothing can harm him, and no one can destroy or damage the fortress except him.
While he searches for the remaining fragments of the immortal ruins to extend the time of his invincibility, he also constantly upgrades and expands his fortress.
Henceforth, the world welcomes its one supreme ruler, father of all, and everlasting God.
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Title: I Have An Impenetrable Fortress/我有一座无敌城 Rating: N/A Status: 420(Ongoing) Start Date: 2020/06 Author other work: History’s Strongest Senior Brother, History’s Number 1 Founder, I’ve Possessed the Demon Sovereign’s Body.
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I enjoyed the first 60 chapters, but the author really dropped the ball afterwards. I’ve been reading the MTL (at around c.250) and its literally the same plot over and over. The MC sends out people to do some task and right before they can complete it they are overwhelmed by the enemy and the MC has to expand the territory to save them with his avatar. Rinse repeat. Nothing is ever accomplished by his subordinates without help from the MC who saves them every time. It’s literally all the plot ever is. MC is about to have enough experience to upgrade his territory? You know there will be some fight that happens right as he upgrades which coincidentally includes everyone within his territory so that he can save them. Also, the upgrading has essentially no effect on the novel other than adding another wall that isnt even used. No additional systems, no changes to the story. Utter disappointment of a novel.
After finishing the trial read(Gotta go fast), I can say the novel is going fairly good. I can't say it's fantastic; nor can I say it's bad. So far, the novel is centered around the development of the MC's fortress, and the troubles he goes through in building it up. Within the fortress, MC is invincible. The issue is, if he leaves the fortress, he is very weak at the moment. Outside the fortress he will have no power. Only his subordinates will have power, but once they leave he has no control. Characters are alright, they have their own personalities. Some of them do overlap, but I can see development for them that couldn't be done in 60 chapters, which is a difficulty trial reads have. From what I can tell the novel will be fraught with misunderstandings about the influence the MC has outside his fortress's influence. It might get repetitive, but all in all it is an entertaining concept and I enjoyed reading the first 60 chapters. I can see the novel being successful. The writing is stable around the intended concept. I do wish, however, that the author went more in detail on the cultivation systems; at least gave us a glimpse at the skills used and what the MC's body is up to. 60 chapters in and I forgot the MC has a real body. P.S. The cliffhanger on chapter 60 makes me want to go jump off the cliff and read the MTL.
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Based on the synopsis, we can conclude that this is a kingdom building novel. It’s written by the author of HN1F , August Eagle, and novels written by August Eagle are always great! Though I’m a bit sad that the previous novel in trial read wasn’t picked, I hope this one will be.
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I like this novel, the title says it all, the MC is OP while in the fortress but not outside. If you like OP protagonists with some kingdom building elements, give it a try.
This novel is somewhat similar to Anchestor Above. The purpose of the system is to dominate the world, and It’s a bit disappointing to me. I don’t mind mc rulling a place and developed it into the stongest place but to rulling the world with messy government is... no to me. I’ll give this novel 3/5
Now, this doesn t deserve the 5 stars, i enjoyed it, but it s not even 3 stars Writing quality It s well, quite bad, in a chapter the translator user "young daoist priest" like 10 times in a chapter, and a lot of words are just used again and again instead of changing them and making the story feel more smoothly and have a diversity.. a lot of stuff seem out of place too, i think the translator is quite lazy, but i still gave it 3 stars as it s readable and not many grammar mistakes. Story development Now i gave it 3 stars, it s moving quite well, not that fast and not slow either, as far as i read he already got the first expansion, and did some stuff there and there, although everyone seems to either attack him or not attack him, it s lacking regarding that and especially characters. Character design Now, i only gave it 1 star because, all of them beside like 3 people are 1 dimensional, and those who aren t, their way of talking feels forced, they say stuff they shouldn t do, they do stuff they shouldn t do, it s just out of place.. And we don t even know the blood demon's name at the chapter i left (like 39). Update stability Well, i started reading this yst, and from then till now there s no new update, it s been almost 2 days already, but i still gave it 3 stars. World background I don t rlly know what to say here, not too much not too less, we know where this happens, what s around it, i still don t know or i didn t understand about the sects around, where they are located and stuff like that, neither we know the planet we re located, overall it s quite average so i gave it 3 stars Overall 2.6
The story is better than I expected. The summary makes it sounds like an average story where MC got isekai'd with a OP system, and does a face slapping marathon using his Cheat, gets all the girls, punches young masters and gets called a 'dragon among men'. But this is much better, this is a very good Kingdom Building Story (I seriously love good kingdom building stories) with great funny moments, the protagonist is OP but it doesn't make the story dull or boring. The side characters are also quite awesome, although there are very few of them, I guess more character will be introduced later in the story. Awesome story. I hope this get selected. Although with Qidian past record, even if you vote this it might still not get selected but I have hope dammit!! Also, Galbella was mentioned twice in the first 60 chapters. This alone makes it a good book. Enough for it to get my support. Also also, the 60 chapter trial ended on a cliffhanger, and I really want to know who that girl was who meets the MC.
This should be rated 5 just by the fact that this is written by the author of HN1F. And this deserve another 95 Stars for being the best in the newly released Trial Novels.
Good potential. I don't understand why cultivation is not pit either in a more prominent position on the story of in a less one. What is the goal of this system? Is it for the main character to become strong or is it for him to develop a fortress? Because on the first 40 chapters, the main character completed plenty of missions, but no reward made him stronger..
This novel is interesting. Definitely better than most trial reads. We have a good world background and story development. I usually write super long reviews where I thoroughly analyze the novel,but I won't do that this time. Give it a try and decide it for yourself. Not everyone will like it. You will feel that the execution of the story is not the best sometimes. I'll definitely read it because this novel can keep me entertained. I expected better when I first saw this novel, but I still like it. It just hurts me that such a good story got blended with Chinese things such as Tang dynasty and other chinese elements. I hoped for a full original story...
Why is this underrated??? This was actually interestingly good! . . .. . . . .......... .....................................
As I look upon this book full of empty pages, I see my own reflection. And because my own reflection is so amazing and brilliant, I decided to rate this 5 stars.
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Tldr: Support this book, if you like op mc establishing his hegemony in politically complex world. I feel positively surprised that this book got selected for trial read. I have already read all the raw ongoing chapters in the Google translate. I even made an account on Chinese Qidian to support the author by buying all the chapters. My review will obviously be quite biased but it's my honest opinion. The mc has an invincible city system. He is basically the god there, omniscient and omnipresent kind. Not just that, every time system upgrades, the city area increases almost exponentially. The catch is: time limit. He has one year for the system and needs to find fragments to increase system time. The characters are likeable and provide great support to mc and the plot. The mc is smart and makes preparations for the future. The antagonists aren't necessarily villains and the mc is destined to be an invader. There is political and diplomatic relations involved throughout the story I especially like the cultivation realms with different systems (as in Taoism, Buddhism, martial art, demon) but they are divided into different arithmetic numbers and a name for that specific realm with no small division of early, mid etc. This gives an intuitive judgement of one's strength without appearing bland. Leapfrogging realms is difficult but possible for one or two stages. There is still much in store with the novel but the author had been inconsistent with updates lately in contrast to huge number of updates initially. This might be due to lower popularity of this book in comparison to his other works. The creator of novel is a full time author. Please support him.