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You have a new wish order:
[Gourmet hunter Alu wants to taste delicious ingredients that he has never eaten before, and the reward is a gourmet cell.]
[Illya wants to summon the strongest servant to win this Holy Grail War, and the reward is the Little Holy Grail.]
[Valkyrie Brunhilde is looking for the strongest human being. What is the reward in order to defeat the gods ? ? ?]
Gustavus Abel has responded to prayers from countless worlds countless times. Although he is a mortal, he is like a god. One day, when he suddenly looked back, he realized that he had already stood on top of the world. And everything in the story has to be told from the perspective of the boy who escaped from the white town that day.
This is a translated novel. But you will find that the quality is somewhat higher because I have the luxury of using GPT-4 (and some human editing here and there)
Original novel: https://m.bqg124.com/read/136168/
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Most of review here seems fake. Who the Fudge is Alu i search tried to search the original and find out it was Toriko DF bruh, if you gonna post MTL that's fine. BUt your asking money for trashy translation come on, be better. At least correct the names of the characters this is some new low. I never felt so disgusted.
It's a translation from Chinese and you barely understand anything, it's basically a story with new characters................................ .
A wonderful translation and nice story. Hope you can continue to translate till the end.
Other than a few minor translation errors in the first few chapters I have no complaints about this novel it’s extremely well translated.
The story flow and idea is great but execution is not so good. The trading thing could be done better.
very interesting story but awful translation. Persons have been reposting old chapters for over a week. Maybe in 6 months there will be an actual new chapter. They're also random old chapters, not even in order and not improved.
The main character got too strong too fast, he’s only 10 and is stronger than Lao g.
Good fanfiction and story development is good [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love the story and the trad can we have the mtl name ?........................................................................................
great translation by gpt 4 great fanfiction story and the translation is good try it my comrades it's a good read 😁 also thanks for the uploader for uploading this .😁
IDK how it was before when those other reviews were written, but all recent chapters have had good translation with very few spelling or grammar errors. The story itself is pretty good. Not mindblowing, but engaging and interesting nonetheless
Too slow, 160 chapters and MC is still in North Blue and most of the story after he joins Doflamingos family feels like a filler, especially the system tasks. Also the quality of the translation drops drasticly in later chapters, feels like the translator lost motivation to keep going and is simply posting slightly edited mtl here. MC himself is likeable so I find it to be a shame that the story progresses slowly and the system tasks are mostly boring.
It's a good read. The stability of the updates speaks of itself. The translator doesn't give up. The translation may be lacking but it's not unreadable.
if you have developed the ability to read mtl than this is slightly better than that maybe.... I think the quality was much better in the start later translator just started using mtl and probably changing a thing or two. people being called different names tsuru was called different names one of which was even kureha 🤦🤦. law is called Luo sometimes obviously translator didn't even bother to read read those chapters and the quality is basically mtl level. now about the story the premise is interesting that villain tag is only there to attract readers mc can be described as an anti hero. the original story was written by a Chinese so you can also expect the young master and courting death stuff ..... MC is soft enough to nanny a girl because she started crying once MC threatened to kill her after she asked to be killed. Also you will get to enjoy some of that cultivation, Dantian and chi goodness here too in one piece ff 🤦. The translation quality is cancerous sometimes it's hard to understand what's happening at all.
Bumping it back to 4 stars,its a good fanfic so it deserves at least that ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Here's my humble review, Spoilers below I have read the entire book, and I will give it a good 3/5, the end was very anticlimactic and very short, not a lot of action, the fight with Shiva was super bad, short, and overall disappointing, but the one with Imu was good, a lot of One Piece lore was skipped over, nothing on the Void Century, but he isn't Oda. There was more that could be added, like a world hop to like bleach and lot of things left unfinished, but it's a decent read, and has its moments. Also what was the point of the Shiva fight, it did literally nothing. Anyways there's more but I don't fell like adding much more. Also no development on the achient moon civilization besides the fact they made Uranus, nothing on sea beast, devil fruit origins, ect.
kureha instead of tsuru,pica instead of senor pink,jion instead of gionne,Luo instead of law.... I don't understand this. Like I admit you are putting in 'some' effort in translating the fic, but this is such a bad translation and you post your Patreon link. It's like asking people to buy a bad/broken product. Not to mention all thses 5 star reviews, I admit the story itself is good but when you constantly put wrong names for people it just becomes such a mess.And this is coming from someone who read 98 chapters. (btw about 6-7 chapters were repeated)