Chapter 1: Rewrite
Hello again.
to be honest i was going to forget about this, but like 2 people didn't and that gave me motivation to continue this shitty story.
So I read through the chapters and fixed the things that i don't particullary like.
i'll upload the thiird chapter in 1-2 days, that's a promise. (though i doubt anyone cares for how long i was gone)
Goodbye.
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