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Harry Potter, the boy who lived. How much do we know about him? About his life? About magic and the magical world? So let's find out what this magical world and its inhabitants are like. Let's watch a new person with sound logic in this crazy world. Will he stay the same? Or will he become just as crazy? Wait and see.
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really great story onlything holding you back is the gramer. some points of the story are just unreadable. please get some form of editing
It is a great fanfiction, actually it could be the best I read about HP. Especially the charachters and the world building are top notch and reallly fun to read. Thank you for the great story author!
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great story. i really like this kind of approach. hope to see the main character dive deep into the school(talents) end develop some unique spells.
Extremely interesting, and you are doing a decent job translating. The story reads difficultly in English. I have read up to chapter 10 and the protagonist, Calder, personifies parts of his soul as feminine and sounds extremely pompous. Like a child is trying to sound intelligent by using big words that they don't quite understand while also still using them correctly just not conventionally. Also you keep calling them magicians where as in the Wizarding World they denote themselves as Witches and Wizards, there is not a genderless classification for the magical humans known as Witches and Wizards as a whole.
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The story has potential. But the writing (translation if tl) is really bad. The author/tl clearly does not understand when to use pronoun it/his/her. It's all mush up. Next one is the naming did the author/tl did not even try to fix it. Another thing is there are paragraphs that just the author thought he/she can try to be more mysterious but did not really able to work on. It will work if the grammar is okay but it's not. I really like the plot here but after dozens of chapters it doesn't even get fixed.
Interesting story, bad translation. The translator is not even trying to correct mistakes and mispronounced names. There are so many helpful programms that could increase the quality but none are used.
hard to read but good story . [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Tbh, the world building is pretty good, but the progression is slowed down by the excessive explaining and details. Not to mention that its really hard to tell whether im reading thoughts, or someone talking.