A Game of Systems

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The_Dark_Fox

I'm the author supporting my own work. hope you all would enjoy this book. I hope to update the book daily and I hope the readers will enjoy my work. Good day to everyone

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Itx_Mahi

I was really Hooked In The Novel when I started Reading it 🙃 Well I was lazing Around But The Hard-work of the Author made Me write A review Immediately😊 Plot Is really Nice💕 Character Design Is Great💓 Scenes R well Depicted💞I Loved the Story Development😊 World Background Is Perfecto💟 Writing Quality Is Best💕 5 stars To This Gem💫 Creation Is Hard So Imma Cheer U Up😍 Well Done Din!💖 Keep It Up N Best Of luck Buddy...!!❣

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Deborah_Pruijmboom

wow... what a thrill this book is! So much action, that I sometimes felt like I was going to have a heart attack from the exitement! Well done author, tou truly know how to engage your readers and keep them at the edge of their seats!

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Vidit_Verma

A great opening chapter. I'm really hooked with the chapter one. So awesome and flawless. I want more of these marvelous chapters. Guys, give it a read !!!!

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Queen_Ochiwa2

This book is nice, i hope i could have the opportunity again to read a chapter, very much intriguing, great work author, keep on fighting you got this and you will succeed.

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God_Of_Brutality

I won’t go too deep into details as they aren’t that many chapters to make a decisive review as of now. If you’re wondering if you should give this a try then the answer is yes. The first chapters are a bit rocky but that’s common for new books so don’t let that stop you from reading further. The writing is also good. A nice flow and very few minor errors that are almost negligible. Updating is daily so not much to add on this. Characters thus far have personalities that set them apart from each other. You won’t feel like every character is plain and or bland. World Development: Still too early but the potential if this world is good if executed properly

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Verhygo

I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 19. (Because there wasn't more published yet.) Writing Quality: The writing is solid with only some few minor mistakes. It's easy to read and understand what is happening. Story Development: Pacing is the major problem I have with this. The scenes don't have enough time to settle, things happen too fast. Character Design: There is some good groundwork for character development, but because of the quick pacing, suffer the characters under it and don't feel like they have enough time to establish or grow from what is established. Update stability: What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess... World Background: Like the characters suffers the world from the speed the story has. I cannot convey its rules to me without confusing me with the sudden introduction of them. Summary: There are a lot of interesting concepts in this story. The world seems interesting at first glance, but it rushes to fast around me so that I cannot immerse myself in it. That is perhaps more a problem of me and not of the writer.

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DragonRiderOfHell

Ok, so I have binge read the entire and current ten chapters. It is really well written and the action scenes are really fun and exciting to read. I almost feel like I am there in person. Aside from that, the character development has been really good as has the overall plot devolvement and the introduction of core mechanics, in this case, is a system, Overall well-done author and keep up the good work!

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Riley_Steverose

I just took out this book when I was bored, and immediately I got hooked to this story. The author might be new, but he knows how to write a good plot. There are just seven chapters so far, and I am looking forward to reading more of this story. Good luck to the author 🙂

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Sankalp_Verma

The writing style is quite impressive as well as the way the author represents his point of view that is just on some another league good luck author you have that dignity to make this book work out very very well[img=recommend]

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Ferjenni

Excellent writing style. Characters and scenes are well-depicted and introduced. Interesting plot. This novel has potential. I gotta say that the author put so much effort into writing this. All the best, author-nim!

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CREATIVE_SPACE

Interesting story... Came across the synopsis and found it hooking. Chapters are very well written so far. I found them captivating. Will buckle up myself for a Great journey with Danny Dorne! [img=recommend]

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nishidurani

The book has easy language, interesting plot and a good pace of development of story. i love how the author is slowly making the world background. a bit of grammar mistakes that did not disturb the flow of story.

I've just finished the prologue but I'm already excited for the rest. It's a good beginning. Gotta update when I read more [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Workaholics_inc

Great pace, good rythm a good grammatical and flowing work.it has a nice plot, good character development and more so Its good and worth reading indeed, so yeah it's a good read

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Sukyna_Katamba

Wow, wow, wow and wooow. It.. is just not just but Fantastic, fantastic, fantastic. keep on going, kudos author. I cant stop reading it but I'll re read it.

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Xiaoru

Very good book .A brand new game elements . Good character building and different from other system stories ..keep it up author .Post more chapters !!

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zushe_sensei

Everything was sooo goood!! Characters, pplot, story pacing, writing everything was balanced and amazing.. definitely a must read.. waiting for more! great job author!!

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leoreview1

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