Arthur(draft)

LV 13

1XVI6

Oh wow, five stars. Well deserved If I do say so myself. Magnificent writing style, wonderful world, beautiful characters, and excellent ideas. Muah, simply impeccable. Ahem! Well, that's enough patting myself on the back. Okay, so I love kingdom-building, but there aren't that many of them. Because of that, I decided to write one myself. So far, I have the first arc completed....in my head. Don't worry. I already have all the major plotlines and twists completed. The only thing missing is the details. But that what makes this fun cuz I am also along for the ride. It might lead to new plot lines and twists, who knows, and honestly, that's what I love about writing stories. Even though I am the author, I love feeling like a reader. So expect some exciting stuff that will make even me gasp. Again, a well deserved five stars ;)

LV 10

DarkNoobWriter11

Until now a great story, although the MC gets several OPs things and it seems that gets everything on the silver plate (aid in kingdom building) but great world background although a little confuse and very complex, the characters are also being well developed like the story and the updates are consistent. Overall a very good read and if you like OPs things this is your ideal story..keep doing the great work

The Ahhh: The author seems to be incorporating history along with mythology/religion together. Though he doesn't stick to any chronological order for the, he does include the factual information about the parts he includes in things he calls 'tidbits' which I personally love. His approach to both historical and mythological/religion is more of a twist of the original for purposes we are still exploring. Personally, I curious to see where the story will go, considering this little fusion of history and myth, especially the historical figures we don't typically know about and the pantheons other than greek and roman that honestly could use some love. The writing style is also pretty great especially when it comes to action scenes and painting vibrant scenery. The Hmmm: The pace of this novel starts out pretty fast with the MC receiving quite the boons. I can see why the author did it, I get it, not everyone likes to write about the slow and gritty beginnings of kingdom building novels. But I do recommend that the author paces things out a bit more since I expect that there are a lot of things to explore and discover. But authur-kun seems to be going that general direction so hopefully, he sticks with it. The world-building is also bit complicated and confusing, but its slowly starting to come together The end: Overall it's a very interesting novel, with great potential. If you are into myths, op mc's, kingdom-building, and unique worlds. It's worth giving a shot.

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