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this novel is mainly about the road of the MC who have cultivated the samsara technique and want to complete it. And become the only eternal. to compplete this cultibation he goes through 1 million samsara. this is his final samsara where he meets people with magical powers ,systems, reincarnators etc. lets see how he becomes eternal.
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the story detail is good and can be improved by detailed information.But chapters are too short and need to process for the spelling corrections.It would be better to do a auto-correction once you decided to publish a chapter for positive reviews.
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This novel is basically Invisible Dragon, but on Qidian. aàaaaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aàaaaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aàaaaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Stories are too short. Translations are not good enough. The storyline is just so so. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
the story is good but each chapter too short...writing has many problem...difficult to read😅😅😅😅..want to know what kind of world this novel take place, what are their cultivation order(based on qi,martial spirit or what)