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Eye System

Fantasy 269 Chapters 3.7M Views
Author: Adam_A

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Levelling also known as cultivation is the thing that the entire world revolves around.

Lex had no family and was found alone at the crash site, is an absolute trash with a weak body and was bullied and abused by those his age.

On the verge of death after he was nearly killed by his bullies he gave up on life until....

{Ding, host has gained the Eye System}.

From then he began his journey exploring the universe and chasing after the girl he loves all while getting stronger and finding out more about himself.

But life isn't that simple and fate is unpredictable. With infinite realities Lex has to make his way up from the bottom wherever he is all with the Eye System.

Gaining more and more Eye Powers, while unlocking more and more mysteries, will Lex make it to the top.

Author Note: Planning for a long novel with an ever growing world and MC and his personality and strength will grow and change throughout so I wouldn't judge the entire novel off the not great beginning chapters and throughout the novel you see the mc change an improve in ideals, personality and strength.

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    Adam_A

    Another Shameless review, but this time I come with important news. 1) I opened a server. Discord Server: https://discord.gg/TtnGfdKanr 2) The novel is being edited and will be improved when I get time to go back to it

    3yr
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    TrialAndFail

    Before reading i just have to add.. Yato's eyes ftw ..And damn required characters for reviews..............................................

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    Jason_Walder

    First off, it was actually a really good story for a while. He was op, but he didnt start with like the rinnegan or some other broken eye power. What he got was strong, but also versatile and used in a cool way. The downfall of the story is the female lead. The way she interacts with, becomes friends with, and partners with him is nonsensical. How is a 14 year old level 90+ have that much freedom? Realistically she would be a government slave or lab rat. The dialogue is just...forced and fake. Can you, author, really imagine two people in real life saying the things they said to each other outside the camp? And becoming his girlfriend just like that? For a battle hardened warrior, no matter the age, that was an immature and illogical thing to do. Also when she followed him, how does she have nothing better to do? She was base commander feom my understanding. Command positions involve 1 thing...paperwork, and she never does any? Unless that is how the school operates and it is completely independent from the government. If that was the case, the government was not nearly as oppressive as the mc thinks. Outside the character flaw that is the female lead, the mc is immature for someone with his childhood. Unless he is drunk on power nobody raised like that eould have the confidence to even dream of having a girl like the female lead. Sociological and Psychological conditioning would have made sure of that. Finally, some things in the world dont make sense, like hos a government issues mecha woth an AI in a world woth apparently nanotechnology relies on a code kept on a piece of paper in a professional pilot and solderis picket. Really? Overall though, it was still a great story derailed by poor exexution of the female lead. I would say work on making dialogue and character interactions less forced and plot driven, and more natural and character driven. Also, I would say reread your story and try to find things that dont add up like the mecha issue, I think you will find more than just that.

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    3yr
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    Adam_A

    This is the author, hope you enjoyed my new novel. Check out my other novel, vote woth power stones and leave a review if you enjoyed. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

    3yr
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    Lord_Meph1sto

    This novel had great potential. But I can't read it any longer, too much forced interactions. Ella's interaction is too forced for me to continue this novel. Well it's ur story so all I could do is vent here. Best of luck

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    DaoisttG3KuY

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    2yr
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    BabyQQ

    this novel have a lot of potential BUT it's just not my cup of tea about the talking system and feel weird about it .. sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad

    3yr
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    Digi_Mon

    reading the first 20 chaps and the story line feels forced and unrealistic. but i love the concept and hope to enjoy more. .

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    inflict

    I just recently bumped and read this novel and I say this is kind of underrated with a bigger potential. Well written and deserve to get a full five stars! If you are looking for a story with gaming vibe, don't hesitate and start reading this now.

    3yr
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    Etwahl

    I liked it up till ch 20 then slowly lost intrest but keep up the good work great concept plus may not be my cup of tea but may be someone elses ๐Ÿ’œ

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    Khalid97

    character is too emotional for my taste,got up to chap 79 and thought that he'll reflect on his past and calm down and says so but his actions speak louder the his words ironically.

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    King_of_Tomatoes

    The concept the plot of the novel is great at least I liked it, just has some grammatical errors which will soon be fixed as the edited ones are underway. It's about a child named Lex builled the whole life and gets thrown off a cliff acquire the eye system. Although maybe op for for the current is actually not so op according to author as the universe and rest hasn't been explored, I advise you guys to read it, it's a bit more fresh than typical novels.

    3yr
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    Excavelier

    very very pumped up and basically that quote in the title is not that far from right the eyes does not hold the most power in the body instead its in the top 5 without are eyes we see nothing without them we can accidently fall of a cliff or even trip hurting our self or even hitting a wall accidently

    3yr
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    Gickel_

    I like this novel, and hope the author just drop it like others. In the following hope the character of the mc get better and being able define himself his own authority and exerce more control over his ability to focus on what he need and discern what he don't. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

    3yr
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    Theforgotenone

    Best novel i have read so fare can be compared to ultimate demOn system ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ

    3yr
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    Bobet_Academia

    thank you author for this wonderful novel...continue soon,I'm excited for the update of this story of reincarnation,adventure and hope...keep up the good work

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    MissCosmos

    As a little payback, I decided to leave this review for you. To show support to the author. ------------------------------------------------

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    Blood_Moon356

    Before I read any of it, the eyes on the cover look like Sasuke's Mangekyo Sharingan!(Not the eternal one) Go watch "Naruto" and "Naruto Shippuden"! Great anime! !!!Spoilers about Naruto/Naruto Shippuden below!!! !!!May ruin your day!!!! !!!Why are you still reading?!? OK, OK!!! Go on!!! Read the spoilers!!! Naruto can't do Clones, tho can do Shadow Clones at master level!(LOL) Naruto gets stonger than Sasuke! Sasuke will go to Orochimaru! Garra will become Kazekage! The masked member of Akatsuki in not Uchiha Madara, BUT Uchiha Obito! Neji will die! Kakashi will lose his sharingan! In the end Sasuke won't get imprisoned! Instead of imprisonment, Orochimaru gets "Home arrest"!

    2yr
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    CiaaDReader

    I just need exp .[img=exp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

    3yr
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    Frost_Souriya

    enjoying the novel so far hope the author doesn't drop it.nice work btw ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ loving the novel will drop a power stone a day as long as you keep writing

    3yr
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