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This book is very good in terms of writing style, word choice, and story development. People out there who haven't tried reading this book should give it a try. :)
I liked the first rendition better, but it was a little bit fast-paced. Although it's still the same, jack is still in space, silver is still a goated fighter. I feel like there isn't much publicity to this work yet but as it grows in chapters and its storyline people would come to love it. If anyone has complaints about this work, they can square up. I'll fight you anytime. ps: I'll make a better review later on.
Honestly, this story is good, but confusing. Confusing enough that I wonder if I can actually describe the story having just read the entirety of what is available. The story revolves around a man that has reincarnated into a dead body that was recently tortured, alongside everyone on the spaceship he is on. While he’s getting his bearings, the ship’s AI has gained a sentience of some sort and has gained abilities that differ from normal AI. This story seems to revolve around them. While the writing quality is good, I think that the story has too many questions left unanswered. The perspective will constantly shift to different people or events, leaving you lost. While these shifts happen, things will occur, yet will not be written about. You’re left wondering if you skipped a couple chapters. Things are discussed, but almost never explained. An example of this is the main character interacting with a new device he’s never seen before, yet as if he received an explanation, is manipulating the device. But we as readers are left in the dark as to what the device does and how the main character is interacting with it. I like this story, but the storytelling itself needs a lot of work. Readers shouldn’t be left wondering where in the story they are, and what is going on.
This is the best book I've read in this genre. The writing is seriously straight from heaven. I am Looking forward to read more chapters as well as new books from you man!! you can really make it to the top... (p.s I'm recommending this book to everyone)
I would say it was a well-made piece of cake. The events were well written. The author has a pretty sharp tongue to describe the very keen details. The way artificial intelligence was described as a woman was intelligible. Apart from that this author really has a bank for vocabulary and carries a dictionary with him. I mean the words were pretty organized. Find a little time for this book. It was worth enough to be in your collection.
The story has a fascinating take on the sci-fi setting and galactic explorations. The author set-ups the variables then mashes then them up on the succeeding chapters. The problem here, if you may, is that the set-ups done with the use of "*****" happens too often in a single chapter. This could lead to losing the momentum driven by the main plotline. Nonetheless gaining insight from different characters is a good technique especially if it's done properly..
A detailed description with a rhythm to it. Apparently, we are found to meet one piece.... I mean Pirates in this novel. The vivid description of the event keeps you on edge. I hope this work sees the attention it deserves s
Writing is vivid and full of detail. World building is next level and really makes you feel a part of the action. The author has a clear vision and the imaergy is stunning. The story is not very far along at this point, but I feel that is has the potential to be epic. Great work!
It's a beautifully written story. The start sucked me right in with the amazing writing style and the amazing flow. Thr worldbuilding is just superb and it's overall an intriguing read. Definitely recommend reading this.
Your writing is really cool, it draws me in. I like how you describe the fight scenes. It's an interesting read, properly executed. Keep up the good work! :D
This novel is awesome! From the opening exposition to the immense detailing, every moment had me gripped tightly in the author’s hand. A unique story to this platform, this book will keep you interested throughout. Great job Author!
Writing quality: It's better than what is expected of a newbie author. The only improvement needed is that author must work on conveying things in a much clearer and better way and keep things subtle and to the point. Update quality: Not very good. Author should upload more frequently. Atleast 3-5 chpts/week so that us readers stay connected and don't have to suffer from waiting for too long. Story development: There are only a few chapters so cannot comment much on it. The pacing is neither too fast nor too slow, atleast that's what I can tell from the available chapters. Character design: It's good as of now. I can imagine the characters the author describes. The only point of criticism here is that author must reduce the narration a bit and have side characters as well as main character interact a little more. World background: Like I've said in story development, there are few chapters so cannot comment much on the world building aspect. All in all, it's a good read for all readers who are into sci-fi genre. A good novel with good potential. Keep up the goodwork author :)
The first thing that caught my eye was the synopsis. For some reason it made me read it twice... I liked it that much. Then, I was mostly impressed by the powerful imagery. They language was good, able to bring out the scenes before the reader's eyes. I am looking forward to see where the story is going. Keep up the good work! <333
The writing style and writing quality are superb! I am engrossed with just reading the whole thing. I must say this is one of the gems hidden especially for sci-fi lovers. Grammar and sentence structure was their best. You won't have any problem stuttering at all. All in all, quality is its finest. Also, the pacing and word choice is lit! Good job!