/ Fantasy / Spirit’s Awakening: The Path of Lightning and Water
4.4 (11 ratings)
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3/24/2024~ In the process of editing and updating my earlier chapters. I’ve learned more in the last 51 chapters and have changed a few plot points. Things like Earth element becoming Nature element. Also, I’ve really kind of just been publishing my first drafts with minor editing for grammar and spelling. I want to improve those initial chapters, especially the dialogue, so I’m going back to make them better.
**Chapters 1-6 have been edited and updated so far. Refresh your cache to go back and reread if you wish! I’ll work on all chapters leading up to the privilege as I continue my daily chapter output!**
This is my first ever novel. I’m a new author and still learning how to tell a story. Please understand that when reading. I’ll do better to improve the novel as it goes if you tell me what it is lacking. Thank you.
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In the enchanting realm of Nexaria, where elemental spirits and divine beings shape the fate of the world, a young boy named Lassim Vanthar embarks on an extraordinary journey of self-discovery and adventure.
Born into a noble family with a legacy of martial prowess, Lassim possesses an unparalleled gift—a connection to two elemental spirits, a feat unheard of in the history of his world.
As Lassim approaches his 8th birthday, a pivotal moment in every child's life when they awaken their elemental spirit, the tranquil peace of Nexaria is shattered by the resurgence of ancient foes—the Dragal demons. With his homeland threatened by darkness, Lassim must harness the power of his dual spirits to protect his loved ones and confront the looming threat.
Joined by his spirited companions, including the courageous Lustria Alisone and loyal Sirium Giffard, Lassim embarks on a perilous quest across the vast landscapes of Nexaria. From the towering forests of Swallowtail Mountain City to the majestic business center of Myriad Spirit City, Lassim faces daunting challenges, battles fierce adversaries, and unlocks the mysteries of his own destiny.
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Write a reviewLove the concept, and the way the book was written(The style of the book), and I also really like how u released 12 chapters in just one day, that one won me in, on top of that the synopsis was pretty nice. Really love the book keep up the good work author!
Extremely good story! The plot is well thought out. The descriptions and writing quality are out of this world. If you happen to come across this review, give the novel a try!
Shameless author giving myself a 5 star review to help promote my novel. Doing my best to try and attempt at least one chapter a day, but please forgive me if I experience writer’s block and can’t achieve that. I’m doing my best. 🙇
Book is really good love the way it’s unfolding so far can’t wait till the mc gets stronger and the battles evolve to a whole new level
I rate this book a five-starThe plot is fascinating. If you're looking for a great fantasy story, search no further.
Very interesting, mesmerizing from start to finish. Can't wait to see the potential of this. Perfect for fans of fantasy looking for a captivating read that will leave them wanting more.
An intriguing story that caught me by surprise. I've read my fair share of novels but this one is really good. I love reading novels with little to no grammatical errors and this novel has that. the world building is amazing and it is a non harem book what else are you waiting for, just hop in and enjoy the ride. Thanks you so much for such a wonderful read.
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First chapter: A couple of cosmic beings dumping exposition on the reader about how amazing and strong the main character will be some day. Second chapter: Main character as a young boy just running around outside, dumping exposition on the reader. Third chapter: A family feast where the family dumps exposition on the reader about family background and politics. Fourth chapter: MC meets his uncle and flies away with his father, and about 30% or so of the chapter are just descriptions of how the surroundings and the uncle look. In short, more exposition. Fifth chapter: an absolutely enormous wall of text talking about what wind wolves do. We get our first little bit of action, and it's a controlled battle against the wolves while much more powerful people look on. The author's note is the funniest of everything, calling it a "serious battle". It took five chapters to come to anything even remotely interesting with a tiny hook. 6000+ words of exposition about a world no reader cares about yet. Additionally, while the writing style obviously shows a good grasp of english with a varied vocabulary, every single person talks just as "lyrically" and "verbose" as the narrator himself. Take any of the quotes and read them in a vacuum. I promise you, without clues like them naming themselves, you won't be able to guess who says who. The entire thing has the same tone, and you might as well have every character voiced by an AI. That about shows the same personality. All in all, while the grammar, flow, and vocabulary are decent, the novel itself is as stale and mundane as a schoolbook. Might as well read a dictionary. That gives about the same result. 2.2/5
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