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The desire to write about a universe that is a mixture of Harry Potter and the Vampire Diaries came to me from this fanfiction: https://www.webnovel.com/book/freedom-is-not-easy-(tvd-hp)_18058466706248105
Sean Bones lives with his parents in the town of Mystic Falls.
But Sean has a secret, it's not his first life!
Still looking for someone to help correct the grammar errors and editing ^^. If you are interested to help and get some chapters in preview, leave a comment in the latest chapter :)
Link to the discord: https://discord.gg/nJ8pERebc2
Link to the french version: https://www.webnovel.com/book/wizard-diaries-new-blood-(fr)_18732152905766905
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Pros Good story idea. The mc doesnt shy away from the “dark” . Cons The mc is extremely childish. The mc has no spine at all. The mcs parents(mainly has to do with the fact that the mc has no spine to stand up to them) No character development at all, after 20 orso chapters there where barely any words exchanged, we do not even know what the characters look like and they just pop up out of nowhere like theyve known eachother since forever. The story is told more like a summary than a story. The wishes, he gets 6 but might aswell have non, outside of great magic power and memory wich couldve been achieved with magic his other wishes where rather pointless and makes him come across like a conplete downer. And did i already mention the relationship between him and his parents? ...
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Writing Quality 3-Stars Story Development 2-Stars Character Design 2-Stars Updating Stability 2-Stars World Background 1-Star These grades are to harsh give him a break!!!!!!!!!!!!
WQ : 4 It's acceptable and readable. That's good. US : 3 U can see yourself SD : 3 Story dev, actually pretty okay. But it become a mess cause of the foundation. CD : 2 Now this is where the mess began. There's nothing wrong with gary stu character, if it's written in a good way. And this is not. With how childish mc is and how he *magically* master magic as soon he was born or reincarnated. WB : 1 It's a mess. What's with the timeline, the whole american-british commute thing. It's like you just smash two worlds together and just go with it. I mean there's dozen better ways to insert MC to VD world and your choice just not particularly smooth.
Pros: The combination of the 2 worlds is intresting, The start was pretty good with the way the Mc stirred things up Cons: Mc acts childish, Mc has no backbone or balls, Mc has shitty and greedy parents yet the Mc doesent have the balls to confront them, Grammar is worse than mine, Characters are usually very surface level and we get no discreption on how they look so we have to rely on meta knowlage
pointless death -> 5wishes to god->reincarnation in HP Since the death of mc is just trash(his death bring 0 to the table) and I hate the concept of 5wishes(like wtf is a point of mc in hp world if you give him god gifts) im dropping it at chapter 1. Should give 1* but since author is doing it for free will give 3*. (If author reads it: Man design the charakter of mc and story from the beginning, killing someone is important. And yet you made it so that its more of a jouk, what the hell is a point of a story if all of story telling is plot armor).
As a proper human I understand that the greed of mankind knows no bound so by thinking realistically.. The MC's wishes are forced and stupid, and the romance is totally forced, if anything this is the most idiotic book I have read, overall this is a bad novel to read.
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I should have read some reviews before starting to read this story because I would have saved my time instead of reading this. Mc complete coward does only useless things and doesn't use any advantages he can get. Gets always ordered around by his parents and never talked back to them. I'm now at chapter 42 and so angry with this mc. Just a waste of time don't read this.
Too low rating, I liked the first 15 chaps and I don't think it's bad. I've seen some bad fics in webnovel but this is acceptable to be hones. A good read on my opinion. btw, this is fanfic so MC can be God and make Harry a girl if he wants. though Author needs to look at the Character Development there too and as well as Background if ge changes things cause things aren't really the same anymore. We have 2 worlds mixed together so Good luck author. I hope you can work it out👌
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Great characters and deep concept Great fusion Adds a new twist to stOry Solid story This story is a vampire Harry Potter Fusion
I really like the storry the Charachter is great, till he turned into a stealing Rat(sorry for Language). It kinda dost match with the Noble and kinda nice but a little Daring Personality of Sean and it makes me sad. Also the devolpment between him and his Parents is first great but then there is the thing with the Philospher stone witch his Mom simply took away, even trouht it didnt belong to her and she had no right to do that. But i like the Background of him and the relation shipp he has with his Friends, he even is nice to some of the People he dosnt like. [img=recommend]
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really good book , I love how how plot is going and I love the character I hope he never become a Villain if anything I'd prefer a antihero or hero, I like how u made him the herald of death. since he's a quarter vela it be cool if he also got their gift to but have complete control over it. if you ever decide to have him have two wives/girlfriend I'd think it be great if the second wife was either Daphne green grass or Hermione granger
Author can't get a point when a question was asked. Check chapter 42, second paragraph comments. Check chapter 42, second paragraph comments.
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Well first of the idea for the fanfic is already quite good and the author does his best and quite a good job overall. Also to new readers a warning beforehand this ff is so AU you wont expect it. So if you read like hey its harry potter/vampire diaries so I should understand world background easy, drop that idea. Author changed so much its only gets confusing if you keep that idea. Now to negative points of this ff and why I only gave 4,2 stars overall. As mentioned above ff its very much AU -> problem is author doesn´t like to explain alot of the background and kinda just hits you in the face with the changed world background. Also he makes a few plot holes here and there. So you sometimes have to reread a chapter 2-3 times before u get it which kinda drops the reading quality alot. All in All I think its a good fanfic and worth to read, even so the author still has to improve on his writing quality.
Writing Quality 3-Stars Story Development 2-Stars Character Design 2-Stars Updating Stability 2-Stars World Background 1-Star Writing Quality[WQ]: I'm going to be Straightforward. It's average and not that good. Not bad, really; But sadly not great either! It has a few grammar mistakes and while I am not that good in English, considering that English isn't my mother language, it isn't that awful either; I hope so at least! Story Development[SD]: It is mostly written in an 'extroperspecive', which means seeking external or societal evidence of information! It is rather trite and clumsy and chapter 1 was honestly useless and could be deleted. It describes that the Mc was killed, got a few wishes, and sent into the crossover world of TVD& HP. But not only did the Mc make an additional Wish which makes it 6 out of 5 but he also lost his memory. And this my friend is the thing that got on me the most, not because he lost his memory but I questioned myself why the author wrote this. He could've just made an Oc that lives in the crossover world of TVD& HP, is powerful, a descent of one of the 4 founders, and a Metamorphmagi! Why make all this Omnipotent powerful ROB shit when you make him forget his memory.....I don't get it. Why make an SI when you make him lose his memory, just make him an OC then. Lastly, it is very plot-driven, and not in a good way! You can see that at the end of Chapter 2. The cost of the wand is also bullshit etc. Also, he only has 1 founder connection, not all but...whatever! What is also stupid is that the author completely messed up timelines and randomly made up things such as altering Susan's age etc. I have a lot more to say, especially his mission....but I want to go to bed! On we go, enough rant about the Story Development. Character Design[CD]: How to makes this short because it is late in the night and I want to go to bed; He is a kid, so that means he is naive, innocent, stupid, etc etc. Not much to say or except that Updating Stability[US]: Well, see for yourself. World Background[WB]: A complete mess up with timelines and background, not much to say here either, mainly because I am tired. An: It is late and I am tired so please excuse grammar mistakes and wrong wording. Also, I edited a lot in Story Development because I found a lot and had to rewrite my sentences.....but as I said, I want to go to bed so I gave a f_uck about grammatically good sentences and just wrote. English isn't my mother language blablablabla.