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Some time ago there was boom of HPxDC and HPxMCU crossovers and Raven from dc actual name is Rachel Roth. I though that maybe you want to add DC later on with MC having connection to Raven from young titans. HP has most of the time very small power cap unless you go OC or add some twist like mana reawakening etc. So many go and set HP as a tutorial of some sorts where MC grows and then he realizes world os much bigger and suddenly MC have so much enemies/potential lines of development he dosen't know which to choose. It's rather popular as it's easier then going with fully original elements.

Well that was much better then i expected. You should add to info under the title that it's AU and about magic being more advanced/original and using science as a base to some degree. It would bring more readers in my opinion as i almost skipped it thinking it will mostly follow normal magical development in books and won't bring much new things excluding german country original background.

Is his surname a random choice or you want to "upgrade" the world after HP lot ends? Because i would very much approve of that particular choice.

Well in theory he is emancipated so an adult, he can stop and ask them to give him a prove Sirius is a criminal which they can't as he didn't have a trial. Of course they they would think he is an idiot, or under imperius/confundus which would mean he would have to make a show of his strength so they take him seriously, but not attack them at the same time to not give them reason to retaliate. Anything more depends on the type of politics/laws you wanna put in this fanfic.

Shiva claps all cheeks he wants to clap...

Kai appears. Tai lung : yo kai let's have a duel, i win you join me in conquering the world together with the kfc brain. Kai: sounds good The universe flips the table...

I hope it was the charles screaming...

Take my stones and thanks for the chap.

So I was right thinking that it was more of a situation of Tai Lung getting a outside perspective and some outside common sense then an actual SI. I like this better this way.

I read the author note but didn't think much of it as i though most of what you wrote there was very obvious... Maybe because i like more dark and realistic fanfictions of shows/books that are shown as family friendly it's easier to understand how in theory a world would work when the pink glasses come off and you see the real deal. For example i read pokemon fanfiction and the dark realistic versions are wild and very brutal. Also thanks for making this fanfiction as I tried finding Tai Lung fanfictions about 2 years ago and until now there is still almost none... and this is top tier at this point.

Avengers jumped to another timeline? I though they took the stones to specifically alter their own timeline instead off killing off thanos in the past etc. To avoid the splitting of timelines, also would the stones even work in another timeline considering that they are useless in alternate universes?

Well i kinda get what you are trying to do here and overall logic is somehow ok even though a little stretched. Just gonna wait for more chapters.

Reread the chapter, this time slowly... It's because of the lawsuits where the trash judge was partial towards bakugo and made Izuku look like the agresor instead.

TFTC

More like the overall ability of applicants is garbage... It's probably more of a character test based on which the ones that pass gets trained later for actual positions.

I just played ratchet and clank and this chapter had that stupid narrative voice in my head...