Zinion - Profile

well that was the second thing that annoyed me, first john's age but I guess the knowledge being planted in his mind could of change him so I let it go... but why are near all good novels when the author decides to ad harems plots gah

dude are you finally back? and why are we starting right at the beginning again?

so why has it been 3 days since your last chapter if your back... man you make me cry. can we get a mass release or consistent releases for a couple of weeks? Also do you not have a patreon?

really hope this doesn't have a harem,

can you change the word Apparate to "POP", you explain what he does and to Apparate they don't need to say it

you should really use poke dollars for the currency

good chapter

my only issue with this chapter is, your pushing to much of the normal James personality, granted i get hes having fun, but from previous chapters he likes studying and learning so these bits don't make sense to me much

thought it is pretty much a rip of from the harry potter serious, still liked the race and unknown willow, as it was planted the same year Lupin came to Hogwarts. so good chapter.

welcome back

feel like you missed a chance for Bryan to flex his magic here, like forcing the water away from the cave entrance.

magic doesn't really follow logic though, not overly fussed just so use to other novels having house elf magic on a different "spectrum" so to speak as wizard same way how fawks can transport people with aperation blocks.

good lord can you change that to the Philosophers stone, seriously hate how it was change to sorcerers stone in America, literally the only country that changed it

I really don't think a wizard power has anything to do with if a elf can apparate them. A strong wizard or witch can stop it from happening but elf magic is different to Wizard/witch magic, hense why wards and that don't stop elfs from apparating.

love the chapter, I would like to see chapters like this. Doesn't mean i don't like the others but sometimes its just game release to game release. if you kept the dates to the same to the original release dates this could be a novel that would be educational as well lol

OOo tonks, honestly, I wasn't expecting that, but atleast good to see that you have an idea about it

gah a 1000 chapter cyberpunk fan fiction and you choose not to, honestly I had been hoping to find a good fanfic that was decent length I get annoyed at novels that are to short or multi worlds. I am in two minds, if at the end of the 60 chapters the story is tied up nicely then I don't mind but I'll hunt you down if the MC and powder haven't gotten together.

good start, but really get rid of that last line...