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I read till 118 chapterd and thought to give my opinion. The world building is good and MC power growth is quite unique. But, there are several drawbacks that make this book very mid level: • One MC who wants to live forever lonely whitout trying to gain any influence in the world. There is no real motivation for him to trying to live forever he was afraid of death. (To Author just wanted to ask what MC will do once he achieve immotality lock himself in a room and sleep. Here you could have made MC the Immortal Emporer of Human Race or something. But you chose not to and wasted the potential to turn this novel into kingdom building novel) • Next almost all are chatecters are one dimensional and they are only trying to backstab one another with zero motivations and character growth. (Here in this book it's just comical how bad the one dimensional characters are just let me give you an example Rose she just comes to MC for his help in one expedition and before he even agrees to join the expedition she reveles the secret of expedition and later regrets it and try to kill him by sending assains on his teail 😮‍💨😮‍💨) • And finally the main drawback is there is no fun or excitement in reading this book it felt tedious. I did not even felt one WOW! or Oh Cool! factor while reading this book that is why this book is not widely recognized. This book has great potential but Author wasted it. Author need to read someother top books in this platform before he starts writing.

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