Badges 16
Moments 1033
hes a true edge lord
If there was a person that made himself a household name during the rebellion it was Aaron Snowstark 'The Demon Lord' as he was called by lords and peasants of the Reach that he plundered and reaved during his time.
Mercenary (Asoiaf)
Book&Literature · Ash_D_Born
changing from first person to third is wild
This paragraph has been deleted.
Modern Family: I want Freedom
Movies · burakku
idk why you gotta go the misogynistic route. is this all you could think about as a reply? you could have declared her as an alien or something along those lines as youve done before but you go the women route. what a disappointment
"Since when does a woman have the right to speak in the presence of men without being given permission?"
Beyond the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Redsunworld
this gives me chinese fanfiction translation vibes
ch 0 1 I am Batman
DC: I am Batman
Anime & Comics · LIl_wretch
its a shame that not once plank was mentioned after he went to run for governor.
"Captain Cortez and I have been working on some reforms to the police and while Commander Hicks is not on board with any of it," Plank revealed and earned himself an annoyed eye-roll from Hicks, "he did recommend you to take a look. Maybe give your input and help Cortez and I finding the right balance. The commander said something about you having strategic accumen for social change based on how you handled your transition back into the LAPD."
LATV: The Life of Detective Ben Weiss
TV · Nuclide
bruh if i knew there were multi povs i wouldnt have read this. *sigh* time to go next
ch 13 13. Solo Questing is Hard
Reborn Gaming Addict
Games · Arden_Light
young man in early forties? thats a middle aged man!
This paragraph has been deleted.
Rise To Stardom
Urban · Caeruleum_
isnt it supposed to be 'my' since its in first person. "Gaelixthox and my Dragons legion". or am i wrong and Jaehaerys speaks in third person
This paragraph has been deleted.
Jaehaerys Targaryen: The Dragon Mage
Book&Literature · Vikrant_Utekar_5653
youre breaking the flow with full stops when you could just use commas. makes the writing more stiff and less natural but if this is what works best for you continue as is
"My sister and I were attacked by the U-Men last night. Which led us on our little adventure of running into you. We called our parents and told them about the attack a little while ago. Naturally they weren't happy. Wanted us to return home. But both Beatriz and I refused. Which are parents reluctantly accepted. But if we hired a capable bodyguard it would do a lot to ease their worries."
All New Sunspot (Marvel)
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
the amount of times he said this already with similar wording
"Where to start ... let's start at the beginning. I would say things started when I went to visit the village of Storm's End with Jorry those moons ago. I saw the condition of the village and its people and was unhappy with it. I knew that there was so much more we could achieve and how it would affect our House should I be able to go through with all of those things."
Robert I Baratheon
Book&Literature · DaoistWDfd8h
youve gotta say when theres a chance in pov or else people will get confused just break a line or something
This whole gap year before university is such a bad thing.
DC: Leave my Cat alone
Anime & Comics · Fat_Cultivator
shaggy and scooby is better than munnin and huginn. if a mc got ravens these are the two names writers always choose.
Now I can warg into almost any animal I see and issue some simple commands except those bonded to other wargs. I have two main bonds for now. Two ravens, Munnin and Huginn. I've been using my bonds to scout the estate. I've used rats and lizards to mfind where the gold and treasures are kelt.
Mercenary (Asoiaf)
Book&Literature · Ash_D_Born
this guy must have serious luck if he runs into the greatest blacksmisths’ shop while looking for a weapon
At that moment, Hans realized something: the man standing before him was one of the greatest awakened, an S-Rank.
Only Wisdom Awakened
Fantasy · Almun_
alcholic forsure
"Yeah..." I agreed a little frustrated, but I figured I couldn't drink anyway. Unlike the other gig I'd done, where I was just someone from the audience who got up on stage to sing, this time I was a contracted artist. Not only did they know I was underage when they hired me, but Selena was responsible for that, and she would probably stop me from drinking.
Gamer Superstar
Fantasy · NunuXD
dont tell me mj is gonna figure out hes kamen rider and wants in
ch 0 4 Chapter 04
A Rider Kick in Marvel
Movies · Najicablitz626
dw about it. one thing i learnt from reading chinese novels is the more you think the more youll hurt yourself. just go with the flow
Yet, it was still a Provincial Level III Hospital. Undeniably, it had high demands for its staff. The job vacancy post explicitly mentioned a starting qualification of a master's degree and required 211 and 985 universities.
Surgery Godfather
Urban · Ocean And Summer
wasnt it mystical?
"Dad, someone's broken into the Psychic Beast Park!"
My Descendants Are My Power
Fantasy · Tristan_Zi