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Thanks for the Chapter!

Thanks for the Chapter!

Thanks for the Chapter!

Thanks for the Chapter! I don't know if I said this before, but I love the way you've decided to make the Force have the utility of a GPS. I've never connected it to that in my mind and it seems like such an obvious utilization in hindsight. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! I love how you've worked in a way to make Voldemort, or a version of him at least, a legitimate threat. That's usually the biggest weakness of Harry Potter fanfics. I'm also interested in all the world-building you've been doing lately. The insight into the more Eastern Traditions of the world is good to see. I do wonder at how all of the plot hooks you've set up are going to be navigated though. The Sect Leader seemed pretty important and if that sect in particular was the chinese equivalent of Hogwarts then the politics of this could get tense. Regardless, I'm looking forward to more. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter!

Thanks for the Chapter!

Thanks for the Chapter!

Thanks for the Chapter!

Thanks for the Chapter! I actually like this latest element you’ve introduced. Expanding the world like this is better than introducing an ancient civilization with magic way more powerful than ‘modern’ magic. I’m also kind of hoping that this guy will end up teaming up with Lucas. Alt!Universe Voldemort seems like a big enough deal that some teamwork might be the way to go. Whatever the case, I’m excitedly looking forward to more. See you in the next one.

*Nagini *Voldy Mahonia and Boldly, really Google?

Thanks for the Chapter! I see that Lucius is getting a little impatient. Our MC has Voldemort basically in the bag though. Sirius is out and that means he has access to the locket, the ring, the diadem and original voldy; he just needs the diary and the cup at this point. Mahonia isn’t a problem yet right? Boldly made her between books 1 and 4 while he was wandering around, or is that my fanon knowledge lying to me. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! I keep imagining Subnautica style leviathans creeping up on the MC and I’m just thankful it’s not some Cthulhu type stuff he found. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! I think the chat group can have whatever gender ratio. The more important part is who you want the members to be. It’d be cool to have some characters from other Chinese novels mixed in with more classic group chat members. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter!

Also the scene with Hermione, the ability to just vibe in the presence of an extrovert is one of my favorite introvert skills.

Thanks for the Chapter! Ever since Lucas/Harry removed Voldemort he’s been doing so much better at acting like a real person and planning ahead. This scene with Dumbledore? *chefs kiss* See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! Looking forward to seeing how Ah Yin reacts to all of this! See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! Lucas is so good here. All of the pre-emptive action is very good to see. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! The MC has a ship now? I like where this is going! See you in the next one.