HeavenlyGrandmist - Profile

Cringy for the way he acts…. in a sense a person Who is reborn(already lived a hard LiFe in past)and parents dead..plus trained in lone godforsaken place to a sage level by a lone sage…would expect to have some serious and mature side to him….fights Are okay but could be better if as a skilled sage he would have more mana control or something of that sort…anyway if you are keeping them for later and develop slowly…that is fine too but a bit more mature in the way he acts would be a upside…just a suggestion fom my Point of view…others might like it…either way your novel you should write it as you see fit…as reader we will always be critics…

I aM sure with his powers he will easily get wiped out….though it started as op ‘sage’….His fights are all Too cringy….two spells…and then ‘hufF’….Seriously!!!