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Btw the fact that he has almost 50% of what is supposed to be a "Sun God" and the "Will of the Earth" his body is unbelievably beyond weak if he can't even overcome a few cancers here and there, wouldn't you say? Author going way too far with their forced urgency side plot to keep the MC on his toes and moving, its getting annoying, mostly because it doesn't really make sense that his body doesn't naturally overcome it.

Oh wow, this took quite the unexpected and unwelcome turn for someone that is not into Minecraft D: let's see of the overall picture will be enough to overcome this hurdle or if we'll have to part ways prematurely.

I do indeed complain on almost every book (you could say that's just as much my hobby as it is reading) but I usually only wring each author once on average, not much of a point hammering on an already bent nail.

Unfortunately at the time of writing that comment I hadn't realized yet that you are the same person as "My harem in DC and Marvel" which I couldn't help but drop due to the incredibly nonsesical, 50 shades of convoluted BS backstories into backstories into mysteries into intrigues, or I wouldn't have wasted any extra words or time on you indeed, my mistake.

This chapter is such a narrative mess that it is basically impossible to understand where he MC is at any given time during the whole bullying ordeal, the lack of ANYBODY noticing any of the myriad things out of place or straight up missing or robbed is beyond staggering and there is not enough suspension of disbelief in the World to make all of this even remotely believable. Still, jack him up with a million powers and I won't complain, but you certainly need to do much better next time you try your hand at writing, for real man..

I mean.. you could line up one or two extra coincidences in your favour, but all these? Come on now, you are making a multi billion dollar company look like an abandoned warehouse.. -_-"

You can play it cool as much as you want but ofc you care what ppl say or think about your book, but w/e, I, on the other hand, truly do not care about what YOU think since I was certainly not gonna pretend that I was gonna change the mind of a guy who already showed this much dedication and wrote over 100 chapters of this, I was just stating facts for other readers to see and agree with. Oh, and what I meant with the harem part was that all she deserves is a tiny spot in the harem, nothing else.

I'll give you credit where its due and say that you probably put about a hundred to a thousand times more effort than the average writer in trying to push their new-gen MJ crush up on their readers, but no matter how hard you try, you'll have to learn the hard way that regardless of how witty and likable you make her appear, besides being allowed to be a footnote in the inevitable harem, her character has no business getting involved with a Marvel fanfic MC, all other mainstay female characters of the setting destroy her both in popularity and hotness (which are the only 2 scales that actually count for the readers) with no contest 7 days 'til Sunday, hands down. Still, I'll say it again, great effort on your part.