LEFT LEFT left NOT LEAVES **** my eyes burn i cant anymore
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Fantasy · Arkalphaze
MADE made MADE made MADE made MADE made MADE made MADE made MADE made MADE made MADE made MADE made STO WRITING ALL IN PRESENT FFS
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Fantasy · Arkalphaze
how did your writing drop to such low level in just like 1 chapter dude I facepalmed so hard after reading this line
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Fantasy · Keikokumars
I mean, very mediocre writing, story isn't about Oz the Magician but more about a kid by the name of Oz who gets boosts in strength just because the enemy is stronger, no trickery no illusions or card tricks, just brute or OVERWHELMING PRESSURE type of fights I've seen so far, do not recommend to those who read the description and got a little bit interested in the story of Oz The Magician
The King of Tricks and Magic
Fantasy · Arkalphaze