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Deep in the night... Im lookin for some loooove...

2018-01-20 Joined Ascension Island

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Godzilla had a stroke from reading that

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"My name is Rock Lee. I am the one who will reach or even reach the level of Kage in the future. I want to use Taijutsu to prevent war from ever happening in the Land of Fire, a country that everyone respects but which all neighboring states greedily eye from a threat and dangerous."

The Journey of Rock Lee

The Journey of Rock Lee

Anime & Comics · Abyssuit

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Please, both Onigumo and Happo Navy were able to use it, right?

First, his Busoshoku Haki is too weak. Second, his physical strength is not strong enough. Although his physical strength is more abnormal than any ordinary person, it is still a little far from the Busoshoku Haki hardening.

One Piece Talent System (by Ye Nan Tin Feng) (completed)

One Piece Talent System (by Ye Nan Tin Feng) (completed)

Anime & Comics · Franxiscus_Siregar

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I wonder if MC will ever realize that he could be training Robin just as well...

After a thousand push-ups, Ross got up and drank some water. After ten minutes of rest, he started another thousand practice squats. His training for physical fitness was one group at a single time and one thousand of it.

One Piece Talent System (by Ye Nan Tin Feng) (completed)

One Piece Talent System (by Ye Nan Tin Feng) (completed)

Anime & Comics · Franxiscus_Siregar

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40? For someone like Onigumo? That's sad.

Secondly, After killing Headquarters Rear Admiral Onigumo he got another 40 Talent Proficiency Points. If the fifth Battleship really dares to fight him, it would have been no big deal to put these 40 Talent Proficiency Points into Physical Enhancement for a temporary recovery.

One Piece Talent System (by Ye Nan Tin Feng) (completed)

One Piece Talent System (by Ye Nan Tin Feng) (completed)

Anime & Comics · Franxiscus_Siregar

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News flash: navigation knowledge is useless on grand line, all you do is sail in the direction log pose is pointing.

Whether it's Ross or Robin, their navigation techniques are not enough to sail the Grand Line, after all, the climate on the Grand Line is really weird and unpredictable.

One Piece Talent System (by Ye Nan Tin Feng) (completed)

One Piece Talent System (by Ye Nan Tin Feng) (completed)

Anime & Comics · Franxiscus_Siregar

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Basicly a dude in a ushanka.

Everyone saw a figure wearing a fur hat, one hand pressing down on the fur hat on his head, jumped down from the hole, and fell lightly above the ruins.

One Piece Talent System (by Ye Nan Tin Feng) (completed)

One Piece Talent System (by Ye Nan Tin Feng) (completed)

Anime & Comics · Franxiscus_Siregar

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Oh really? You think? Geppo useful for devil fruit user sailing the seas? Very controversial opinion... 🤡

If he had learned Geppō, he can directly traverse the sea by air, ignoring the Battleship's artillery fire, cross towards the Battleship, and then sink the Battleship.

One Piece Talent System (by Ye Nan Tin Feng) (completed)

One Piece Talent System (by Ye Nan Tin Feng) (completed)

Anime & Comics · Franxiscus_Siregar

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"Depending on size it should be midium-size battleship but it identifies as a huge battleship."

Robin came to Ross's side and reported to him, who was training his ability, "Captain, the deck and the cabin have been cleaned up, and I have spotted a Marine Battleship in the southwest direction which is heading towards us. Depending on the size, it should be a medium-sized Battleship."

One Piece Talent System (by Ye Nan Tin Feng) (completed)

One Piece Talent System (by Ye Nan Tin Feng) (completed)

Anime & Comics · Franxiscus_Siregar

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MINOR SPOILERS Decent story, especially considering this platform usual quality. Few things I believe could be improved: - I'm allergic to words like "testament to", "palpable" and a few others. I'm not sure what kind of AI or application writers use to "better" their writing but HOLY SHIT... Every single person sounds like a 55yo English gentleman talking to his fellow Lords. It takes away a lot from the story. (btw: check the part about leaf sticking exercise, there's like 4 instances of "was a testament to" in 2 sentences) - Story at this moment is extremely idealistic. MC met zero resistance, every person he met was super nice, helpful and had no ulterior motives to their actions. His every action was successful in one way or another. Noone question his extensive knowledge, otherworldly ideas or stupid lies. Even S class ninja around him are naive. - Naivety of side characters being us to the naivety of ideas. For example MC is challenged to reach genin level of strength in one year and needs money. To succeed he makes a "long term investment" into opening his restaurant. Either someone here doesn't understand business at all or konoha has its own ideas about what "long term" means. Whole business thing is actually really naive here. MC making prognosis on his future earnings... based on what data? Putting so much work into flashing out this side of a story and making it so naive feels really bad. If I had to use one word to discribe this story, it would definitely be "naive". Overall it's a decent read.

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