That sounds like a man name not female…
"Glisson, that's such a lovely name!" Quinn praised from the side.
Fantasy · bomer_allen
‘Perfect her body’… what kind of doctor even thinks that way?
"And rest assured, I am a professional gynecologist, no matter how beautiful a woman or how perfect her body, I won't be moved in front of them."
Fantasy · bomer_allen
How she becomes a zombie than a stupid subhuman, but now she’s stronger??!
"Ding! Miranda levels up to an intermediate subhuman. To level up to the next level, advanced subhuman, you need 0/1000!"
Fantasy · bomer_allen
Why is he just announcing his arrival??
He quickly replied in the chat box: "You wait, I'll be there in no time!"
Fantasy · bomer_allen
Who says guns allow for strengthening of themselves? Weird to allow guns to boost your real body, then author gives mc a random sword he can’t even use properly as his first weapon?? Let’s use common sense when reading, ok 👍🏾
Now, on the first day of the apocalypse's outbreak, many people were busy hiding and looking for safe houses. Those daring to actively challenge the zombies were still in the minority. In a few days, once everyone had secured stable living quarters and faced with the pressure of food shortages, they would inevitably come out to fight desperately against the zombies. By then, the secret of gaining strength by killing zombies would surely be discovered.
Fantasy · bomer_allen
This guy is really not smart at all… literally just an fool with an coward heart, Smfh
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Fantasy · CoughBlood
So he’s escape plan is just to brute force it…
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Fantasy · CoughBlood
Df?
Dona released her earth-shattering moan, and her own liquids exploded out into his crotch. Mark laughed. "We should have done this before bathing!"
Fantasy · CoughBlood
Yo legitimately, what’s the point of even reading after this??? He already won!?
[: Congratulations, Host has unlocked Primordial transformation, True Primordial Transformation, Forbidden Primordial God Transformation, Primordial Control, God Authority, Dragon's Force, Immune Physical Damage, Primordial Qi, God's Body, Primordial Code, Universal Regeneration :]
Action · ADboy245
No it represents over usages, simplicity, and zero brain unoriginal. Just another *ugh* mc with nothing interesting to be found.
[: It represents the beginning and the end, and Primordial Beings are among the most powerful ever, even scaring the God of War :]
Action · ADboy245
That’s fine and all but it still gotta be well written, but main issue is if this just going be one of those useless reads where mc unlocks everything just by breathing and his females become just as stupidly written just because they sided with him?
(This is an extremely overpowered Protagonist where the Main Concept is what the title of the novel sounds like, and it's a wish-fulfilment type of novel where there are Harem, Yandere, Milf and Netori). If you are not interested in amateurish work, pleasure turn the wheels around)
Action · ADboy245
A slave… badmouthing her master while holding his child… you really know how to write huh author…
"Oh, I hope you won't be as shameless as your father," Luna mused while looking at the child.
Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
Wisdom of a god……
"How about it, father-in-law? Is the money sufficient?" Maximus asked as he handed a storage bag filled with 100,000 gold to Francis.
Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
Remember readers… mc has wisdom of a GOD… honestly who are we to question his business decisions?!?
This move also caused the price of salt to fluctuate, shifting from the previous range of 20-30 gold per kilogram to 15-20 gold coins.
Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
Literally a stupid choice for mc to pick or author to even make up, by him choosing this all mc plots or strategy moves gotta be ultra genius level input or this technique wording is just clear bs?
[Divine Consciousness(Tier 0): A method that involves transforming your consciousness to gain insight and wisdom of a god. Chapter 1 Price 100]
Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
Did this idiot forget the whole “I’m weak” dialogue?? Why is he leaving himself open towards such obvious ambushes??! Yo author made this guy choose that usless divine wisdom god meditation bs, just for mc to be idiotic with no foreshadow wisdom whatsoever?? Let’s be honest though choosing that technique was the biggest mistake, since mc wisdom is always going be author own.
"Hmmm, I'll return in a month then," Maximus decided.
Fantasy · Lord_GrimR
Alright can you chill out author? Like your over addressing everything, while it’s really not that deep…
Lina listened to his words as if she was listening to holy words spoken out of god's mouth. His words were like Divine words.
Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69
This supposed to be second class?
[Swordsmanship: Third Class, High Grade (99%)]
Eastern · Thousand Lakes True Person
What about that wine gu?? Literally doing nothing but wasting money…
He doesn't have any problems with this, after all, he doesn't have the talent for business. He'll leave it to the professionals. His main task is cultivation.
Eastern · Thousand Lakes True Person
?!? How df is that part of gathering??
"Finally, I can make clothes and strengthen buildings. Everything is set!" Howard's eyes lit up.
Apocalypse - Zombie Cultivation System
Fantasy · bomer_allen