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The story idea is brilliant. Very original. It would be even better if the protagonist grew some ruthless bones in his body. If someone in the future will assist the protagonist template of the world, then it would be better to simply remove them from the equation before they're allowed to help the template at all. Proactive elimination of risk.

It's actually simpler than you would think. Why do adventurers go out to fight monsters and complete all sorts of quests? Isn't it just for the quest completion rewards. Make it so that even if women complete goblin extermination quest they won't be rewarded with even a penny. Without the incentive only the fools would still risk their lives.

Started off average...but turns into a real monster! Addicting alright, especially since the author is a passionate football fan. Knows his stuff, and includes trivia in the novel!

Ah yes, Narnia. A whole new world inside a wardrobe - love to see it.

For this genre...it's never a good sign when the MC is smitten with every single women he encounters. Literally. He only saw 2 women in his new life so far...and he's been utterly obsessed with both of them. It's alright to appreciate women, but not to this degree.

Weird. I thought he would've killed her for her powers? Especially since Freya is the only one who knows that the MC is in-fact just an ordinary student - and he really shouldn't have been able to defeat a S-class monster. Killing her would've been the wise choice, not only does the world remain blissfully unaware of the MCs oddness but he also gets a new power.

This is great, but I can't help but wonder. Wouldn't it have been more promising for the MC to have been transported at least a decade or two back before cannon even began? This way the alternate-history Prussians would have a foundation of strength. Not to mention also give the MC time to plan against all sorts of cannon disasters that are about to come to Westeros.

I honestly don't understand. What's the point of Sam's background and his past? None of it seemingly matters. Sam is instead behaving like the role model good person, he is such a good person, you might as well have made the title 'rebirth protagonist's journey.' He rescues damsels in distress. Feels happy from other people's happiness. Forgiving betrayal with a snap of his fingers is one thing itself is weird, but to forget all his suffering and pretend like none of it happened? Now that's just pathetic.

MC already white knighting complaining about system '100% loyalty' being no different from brainwashing. Seriously - in Total War: Warhammer world. An indequate MC ruins even the most promising of novels. Alas...

Still feels like MC isn't taking the world seriously enough. Especially when it comes to Players. Hopefully, he doesn't let down his family in the future.

So...the point of this story is for the transmigrated MC to lick the protagonist of this world? Helping him in every single way imaginable and possible? This is a new low even for Webnovel standards.

Everything so far is reasonable, but I do have doubts regarding MC's aversion to having children. Surely having children with Yu Lei would add extra shackles to their relationship? Furthermore the children themselves can be used as assets in the future. Our MC isn't going to be young forever after all.

Brutal. Realistic. Pragmatic. This is how alt-history should be written.

Hopefully, MC will have several offspring soon. There's no need to choose his heir quite yet...but he really does need a few male sons if he wants to stabilise his dynasty (by extension, the empire).

This behaviour is shockingly cliche. From MC being stunned at how beautiful FMC is, to the cheesy picklines and kindness the FMC showed. Not to mention the the chapters previously (being rescued by an old granda with a 15-year granddaughter). Oh can't forget the MC also likes to monologue about kindness every now and again. The synopsis and the actual content of the story simply isn't matching up.