Blazedtrail

21d

Posted

the author has a lot of interesting ideas, creating many cool events and impressive world building. My only complaint is the repetition of the same daily cycle. You can easily remove 600 chapters of repetition.

The First Store System

Fantasy · pinaka_

Blazedtrail

5mth

Posted

Its a good story, even though the writing quality could be better. Also this is basically the story of Aphelios from League of Legends

Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest

Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer

Blazedtrail

7mth

Commented

Is this a one piece reference?

"Praise the Will of the D!!"

Lord of the Time: I Can Reincarnate Infinitely

Fantasy · MadScythe

Blazedtrail

7mth

Commented

it's good that he isn't human. I am bored of that

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A Journey That Changed The World.

Fantasy · NegansPalace

Blazedtrail

8mth

Commented

i think the author plays too much LOL. We have Darius, Ashe, Sonna, Rengar, and now Yorick. Thats already a team of 5

ch 29 Chapter 29 - Yorick

Life Stealing System: I Became Immortal After Reincarnating!

Fantasy · JALLEN

Blazedtrail

10mth

Posted

The author has a nice idea for a story, but the execution is wrong. The story doesn't properly introduce the world background nor the characters. Moreover, each chapter has some details of the interactions missing, making it harder to understand and keep up with what is happening.On the other hand, the author's english and language structure is very good, no complaints there.