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Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
But would he have had the funds to buy another?
The undead creatures emerged from the portals, ready to do their master's bidding. The two skeleton warriors, the zombie warrior, and the ghoul began to move, their movements slow and uncoordinated at first, but gradually becoming more fluid and purposeful.
Eastern · BLACKangelmarl
Wouldn't the zombie be respawning since he was killed? The week or month it takes since the author didn't explain why he changed the time frame.
The undead creatures emerged from the portals, ready to do their master's bidding. The two skeleton warriors, the zombie warrior, and the ghoul began to move, their movements slow and uncoordinated at first, but gradually becoming more fluid and purposeful.
Eastern · BLACKangelmarl
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Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
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ch 169 Taming Treasure Seeking Mouse
Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
I love the story. You have a great concept and I like the storyline. I agree that the collector identity is great. I also love all the misunderstanding. They are so funny. The cons would be the clones. But mostly because I find them overpowering when you had limitations on the system to keep the character balanced. I read the previous chapters before you remade the story so I know you probably don't want to rewrite it just for that. But I would suggest making a discovery of a weakness the clones have l, like possibly a time limit and having to remake them or that they have to be in contact with the original every once and a while. Up to you. I as a reader would also like to see a goal for the mc. We know he is a reincarnation. But we don't know his passed. So we don't know what motivates him. Is he materialistic and wants to collect rare items or pets. Does he want to live forever, or build a supreme sect or maybe find out more about the system? Last suggestion is I would also like a villain or antagonist. But otherwise I enjoy the story some fight scenes would be nice but take it at your own pase. Oh and I agree with No Haren please I wouldn't mind a love interest but honestly not big on it. But I'll still read on no matter what. Keep it up. 👍
ch 169 Taming Treasure Seeking Mouse
Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
Elf
The rest of the vultures saw their comrade fall in the hands of the human. They were enraged and attacked.
Fantasy · Mister_Writer
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Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
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ch 116 Arrive At The Monkey Town
Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
Aren't dogs color blind?
His hands were covered with golden-colored fur, and he couldn't even call it his hands anymore.
Fantasy · Fixten
10+5+20+50+20=105
"In total, there are 100 marks you can get from this, and you need to get 70 marks to pass."
Eastern · Snoring_Panda
YOU only have one attack method!!
"Where did that white cat come from? It's so fast, but luckily, it doesn't have any other attack methods."
Eastern · Let me laugh
storage bag?
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Eastern · Let me laugh
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Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
Delicious in Dungeon
Remarks: Boil it, mash it, and stick it in a dungeon.
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher