herbert

herbert

2mth

Posted

I think the premise for this is very cool. I hope you continue with it 🙏🙏🙏😩😩😩

Reborn as Nanami Kento

Anime & Comics · Divine_Sex_Dragon

herbert

9mth

Commented

new version of ligma just dropped

And through it all, the wood and leaves even got new names; Lagana and Foglia respectively. I quite like those names, to be honest.

In DxD with the Eyes of God

Anime & Comics · Ventus889

herbert

10mth

Commented

-2 for making a chapter in order to rant

ch 15 Purge

Themyscira's women not letting me go

Anime & Comics · phantompain

herbert

1yr

Commented

You already recommended this fic on chapter 136

ch 157 Harry Potter and Ice Cream Delights by Luckner

Fanfiction Recommendations

Anime & Comics · Monsterb620

herbert

1yr

Replied to ONE_ABOVE_ALL

I remember seeing this on FanFiction.Net

Naruto : The War Hero

Anime & Comics · Uzumaki_Kushina_21

herbert

1yr

Replied to Br4tsch

I tried reading but it was too hard. Author uses the … to end almost every single sentence/paragraph. It drove me crazy.

Naruto : Journey to Dragonhood

Anime & Comics · Book_DragonKing

herbert

2yr

Posted

I still have no idea what black rock shooter is but this story is amazing anyways, one of my new favorites

Bounty Hunters: True Legends [To-Repost]

Anime & Comics · Photosphere

herbert

2yr

Posted

I’m on chapter 129

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herbert

2yr

Posted

Really horrible translation, instead of being called “One Piece”, the world is called “The Pirate”. It’s just a bad mtl.

One piece: 100 times the practice plug-in

Anime & Comics · The_Legend_

herbert

3yr

Posted

MHA+Persona+Horimiya=Profit

Trickster's Game

Anime & Comics · Jaxsin

herbert

3yr

Commented

One who trains swordsmanship: Swordsman One who trains fightsmanship: Fightsman

[Ability]: [Fightmanship: Lv3]

My Touch Corpse System

Anime & Comics · InJustThis

herbert

3yr

Commented

Amen

Evidently I HAVE to write this: People, my dear readers. THERE WILL BE NO WORLD TRAVELING. EVER. FINITE.

Evolution System in High School of The Dead

Anime & Comics · LastInkBender

herbert

3yr

Replied to Dave_Guest

Dark naruto Fanfics are rare? The only naruto fanfics I have found on this site have been dark :(

In Naruto with More More Devil Fruit

Anime & Comics · Crook_Shank

herbert

3yr

Posted

Its pretty good, I just noticed that you’re missing question marks and exclamation points in the places they belong. Without them you cant really tell the MCs tone of voice. I dont know if you fixed this because I haven’t read too far yet

While Others Cultivate, I LVL UP In My Sleep Using The Dungeon System

Fantasy · Adam_A

herbert

3yr

Posted

Good story :) Keep it up!

Is it Wrong to Build a Bonfire in the Dungeon?

Anime & Comics · TheMostAbstract

herbert

3yr

Commented

“Oh my goodness, its really him, he is destined to be one of the greatest experts of all time”. “tssss~” he sucked in a breath of air at this discovery. Lol it becomes easier and easier to guess the author’s train of thought in these types of novels.

That’s right! It’s Tyrant Bear!

Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God

Games · Lucky Old Cat

herbert

3yr

Replied to empire1

It seems fine on the surface, but many sentences make no sense, breaking any sense of immersion you have. It’s one of those things that can make you drop on chapter one.

One-click Cultivation System

Fantasy · _Ancient_God_

herbert

3yr

Posted

Your writing style is confusing. I dont understand why you dont use quotation marks. It makes it kind of difficult to read. It’s like the characters are speaking to eachother through their thoughts.

World's Strongest Cameraman

Urban · SomeoneBad

herbert

3yr

Posted

Does anybody mind commenting a better synopsis on this review? I can’t read without knowing what I’m getting myself into.

Extraordinary David

Fantasy · Melon-Seed-Eating Crowd

herbert

3yr

Commented

[Extreme Writing Tip] I just noticed that you don’t fully capitalize the names of places. What I mean is Soaring cloud city—>Soaring Cloud City. It’s the same for chapter titles as well. :-)

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Myriad Realms Grand Manager with a God Class System.

Fantasy · tempestpanda

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Reborn as Nanami Kento

In DxD with the Eyes of God

Themyscira's women not letting me go

Fanfiction Recommendations

Naruto : The War Hero

Naruto : Journey to Dragonhood

Bounty Hunters: True Legends [To-Repost]

One piece: 100 times the practice plug-in

Trickster's Game

My Touch Corpse System

Evolution System in High School of The Dead

In Naruto with More More Devil Fruit

While Others Cultivate, I LVL UP In My Sleep Using The Dungeon System

Is it Wrong to Build a Bonfire in the Dungeon?

Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God

One-click Cultivation System

World's Strongest Cameraman

Extraordinary David

Myriad Realms Grand Manager with a God Class System.