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what about your other novel, the hollywood tycoon one. is it dropped?

what about your other novel, the hollywood tycoon one. is it dropped?

the antagonist was needed but you created a second one without giving a closure to the first one. I mean, what would lucas do about his family, I mean payback? and then harvey?

why not change his name and clarify things, maybe just before oscar. and does he fear his father or something like that? then its just lame.

would there be any difference if he hadnt fought dumbledore. I mean this fight had no consequences. there was no meaning in it. he didn't injure dumbeldore, he didn't take or break the elder wand, didn't do anything. why did he fight in the first place?

harry has a bad childhood manipulated by dumbledore. just agune, if skylark grows his friendship, helps him see, then harry joining skylark leaving dumbledore.....its just i am feeling bad for harry, his whole life is worse than an elf, atleast they know their masters

we sure remember damien very differently. he is the worst among all bat clan members. i think damien is someone else's son with bruce's apperance

so there is still damian?

so, he doesn't like heroine because she matured and got sensible? free of heart? maybe I dont get it...well let's see what the author does.

lone hero was the perfect one. partner was a necessity for the original batman not this one. let others be a dumpster. gotham only needs batman. i just cant picture a situation where she is absolutely needed. just give her a normal and safe life in gotham protected by ONLY Batman because as he said gotham is his territory. waiting for constantine's retribution.

bruce wayne is batman? how did she get there? let them appear together and then her grain brain will turn into popcorn

cheated of lifesavings and inheritance? poisoned? and still reform? then why did you write about being an anti hero. i request you to understanding its meaning first

I hope line zhi goes to jail

dear author, is it that necessary to keep hiding that he has lost his memories -maybe he could just say that some of his memories are missing, no need for details. a lot of misunderstanding could be solved.

excellent story.......just few things.........1>let ace live for himself, trying to survive because it could bring pain to his loved ones is not that appealing...2>the image training part is a very big cheat, could have just given the power to practice in different space with maybe 20:1 time ratio compared to real life....3>maybe double devil fruits and swordsmanship.

go to company's boss, eye contact with him, let him agree to a new contract of higher pay, absolutely eve's choice on producing songs, higher percentage of profit distribution, and everything that is advantageous to the group, sign it fast and then viola, everything solved. but something tells me, june definitely does not have the brain to think of it. ............

author, how about a chapter named "cliffhanger"?

second chapter?