I find the story interesting but there are loopholes in the plot that doesn't make sense. if she knew how to fight & be a strong character she wouldn't act cowardly in front of other people. why let those people run over u like that. not believable. the back story needs more details. no point in revenge if ur the one to let them walk over u like a coward u shown them.
ch 29 Chapter 28 : Siblings
Fantasy · mata0eve
are u sure he is 4 & not 14? he acts like a rebellious teenager!!!
[A/N: And what are you? You 4 years old brat!]
Urban · Flow07
meat is animal food we eat MEET is to see someone or some things
Luckily the sea is clean and clear. So far they didn't meat any problems or dangerous animals.
History · JennyS
taught should be thought. that is to think. the word taught is to teach. please watch your grammar & verbiage. you have used it wrongly alot.
He taught the little girl is cute.Kendra looked at the two and shook her head. Will she lose her sister to this boy. Isaa is just four what is she thinking about.
History · JennyS
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
ch 0 1 Deadly Thoughts
Femme Fatale: The King's Deadly Temptress
Urban · NixxxiE