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The writing quality is horrible, it seems like a typical Chinese story translated in quantity, the character development is based on photosynthesis

The grammar needs improvement, the story progresses well but suddenly it begins to drop information one after another without allowing it to be understood

The sad part of the story are the BOTS in the reviews with accounts from a couple of months ago and I have already seen this story published elsewhere

Confirm that the story is advancing in my opinion it is getting worse the last chapters are practically information and quick information And jump from one event to another as if nothing had happened

I would like you to at least put the link to the original story and give some credit to the original author in the synopsis Apart from that the story is interesting and it is a good choice of translation.

The story has many parts without context, the time jumps are random and the grammar is annoying, it is continuous text divided into paragraphs Clearly the plot jumps from development to revenge and sudden acceptance without arguments seems forced