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The novel is pretty good but onomatopoeia is too much making it difficult for some readers to comprehend, I get that you want readers to have an image of the world you are creating but the onomatopoeia is killing it slowly just try your best to reduce it
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The novel is pretty good but onomatopoeia is too much making it difficult for some readers to comprehend, I get that you want readers to have an image of the world you are creating but the onomatopoeia is killing it slowly just try your best to reduce it
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