Makoto_Yuuki

2yr

Posted

I absolutely adore Audrey as a person, and while she can seem quite manipulative and cold at times, she never turns her back on someone that really deserves help. There may be quite a few spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, and I'm not quite sure if Kate is male or female anymore, and spark cities name kept changing at random times. I can't wait to read more about her life and adventures!

The Genius Mage

General · AB

Makoto_Yuuki

2yr

Commented

Even Kana knew most of this was her own fault. But she rather blame someone else at this time just to make herself feel better. Kana stood up on her hind legs and pointed at the temple with her right claw: "Fine! You wish for me to come inside you so badly, then I will do just that! Feel the might of this little winged lizard rage! Rawr!"

Reborn As A Dragon Girl With A System

Fantasy · invayne

Makoto_Yuuki

2yr

Commented

what skills do you want? All of them. I'm sorry sir but that's not.... -throws points- All. Of. Them.

Remaining skill points: 1,000

Closed Beta That Only I Played

Fantasy · basso77

Makoto_Yuuki

2yr

Commented

"Robbery? Line up at the back!"

My Passive Skills are Invincible!

Sci-fi · Ultimate Guaiguaipi

Makoto_Yuuki

2yr

Posted

from what I've read so far, while touching a few writing tropes, the story is well thought out, the character building is steady, and the reactions of the other players to god slayer are rather accurate in how many gamers would react.