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Is this a Chinese translation or did you get the idea from a Chinese story? The story is super bad, the protagonist is a Sasuke, an emo who spends his time simply obsessed with power, almost the entire story is about him training.

Well, the translation is pretty bad, it's hard to follow the narrative, the protagonist is as flat as possible, just a random guy who wants power and a big part of the story is him training and showing off his power.

If the law that part appears in the first chapter, I mean that the protagonist changes some important event, has a romance with a character, the story changes or it will be all the sagas and events of the anime.

Actually, you're right, I only read about 20 chapters. You can give spoilers to see if I'm wrong and it's worth it.

This is not funny, neither history nor logic, a piece has been transmitted for 20 years, they could not respect a little of the history that has already been formed.

This story is absurd, I don't understand what the point of all this is to give away crazy powers and that's it?

I tried to do it but this story is very bad, first of all a lot of Chinese idioms, the protagonist can steal powers and give them to whoever the protagonist is, he has no charisma or objective that interests you in his trip out of the world. The fact that he loves all women and the worst of all is that he is not alone, there are many other reincarnated people who are just there to get slapped.

It's not bad for your first fic, but it still has a long way to go. First of all, everything you do is already sufficiently exploited, so you have to make the protagonist more charismatic or at least control his mood swings.