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sorry for the ramble but ya it's not that bad

u say that like 99% of authors on this app don't do that it's so they don't have to drop they're novels they like and can keep high rating sure it's not the greatest thing to do but it doesn't harm no one and this book is actually great as someone who has read to chapter 516 I can say he develops as a character and stops being such a dick and the world become a lot more interesting as they start visiting other places and some stay a mystery like the light faction is still not even touched on besides the fact that they are strong as fuck

the dialogue is to long? to me it just sounds like ur lazy if u can't accept the fact that people talk a lot in the real world then u need to go and talk to more people outside instead of through a mic

mc isint even that much of a dumpster fire hadn't even done that bad of shit yet

u sure we reading the same book he ain't a siscon from where I'm at he let his "sister" get her ass beat multiple times and didn't even care his power has never been unstable and he uses both magic and qi with no draw backs and u make no sense by 2 step forward 1 step back are u talking about how the broken ass items he enchants that come with a curse that arnt even that bad bc if so ur trippin

I mean u can kinda call it a different dimension but honestly it's just a different planet in a different solar system thing it's still connected to Quinn's world in mvs

lmfao I'm thinking about this again and u rlly sound dumb as fuck lol I think the alcoholic here is u dude

lmfao like I said pressed little kid

lol so like I said eariler ur just a pressed little kid lmfao

can u stop getting pressed bc I called u retard (witch is true) in another coment section bc u obviously can't understand common and easy sentences lol

lol what part of that was mentally ill I'm saying the dude is a weirdo bc he like when his girlfriend cheats on him lol and bc I'm using slang and on a phone and not gonna type my messages like I'm writing an paper for school

lol looks like there is another brain dead kid I have to explain the meaning of slang to it's not the fact I can't but why would I type like I'm writing a college English essay lmfao I'm in a comment section of a book and ur the retard who can hardly understand English when u thought this guy didn't make any sense what right do u have to correct anyone on what they say when u can't even understand what a complex sentence is lmfao

I think ur just dumb as fuck honestly

U ruined the book on the king game rlly having Kuros girlfriend kissing another girl that’s cheating and the fact u just write shit like that is weird and ain’t gonna read this book if they don’t have enough respect for each other to not do shit like that like how u gonna make them a couple yet have them cheat what u like when your girl cheats on u or something werido

U ruined the book for me the instant u start using differnt pov and u did it for no reason u where writing it just fine without and now u just had to ruin it with stupidity It’s sad and disappointing and It just makes the book so much worse I will higher this rating if there is less pov change from where I’m at but no reason for like every fucking chapter to have 2 differnet pov changes like who gives a fuck about there pov just show it from the mc pov