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I read a couple chapters thus far but before reading any further I wanna ask if it’s still being written like a long summery? Don’t get me wrong it’s pretty good but it’s like everything going at fastforward

What about threesom tho? If they get a little frisky

So the whole story was for nothing then? He goes back to the real world and thats it?

Nah i meant expectations character wise. The way I see it if you have enough balls to procliam to want a harem like just minutes after you reincarnation or whatever than you must obviously you know, have some girt (or something wring with you, not that I wouldnt have done the same…) after ember turned into a humanioned I would have taken a nice one week vaction to enjoy myself I have no clue why they needed to go out and hunt skeletons for crystals if they got a 2 million ticket reward and with his previous amount earned he should have close to 2 and half even after some spending. Though I guess he needed to train or whatever but it still could have waited a while dude almost just died I would think some would want to relax afterwards Cool that he got a succubus army I hope he actually enjoys himself and doesn’t just boss them around while being afraid to look at them, cause they’re too hot and are giving him the eyes

Though I will say the fight scenes weren’t bad the interactions tho…we didnt even see that guy again guren or whatever his name was and the chicks..honestly I wished that one chicks phonix would have died just for the sake of it and cause it would have been kinda funny and soooo justicefield

Though I will say the fight scenes weren’t bad the interactions tho…we didnt even see that guy again guren or whatever his name was and the chicks..honestly I wished that one chicks phonix would have died just for the sake of it and cause it would have been kinda funny and soooo justicefield

I swear it’s like every authour on here has some sort of pact where they need to make their mc a spinless coward when it come towards dealing with women I honestly dont get it. The story isn’t that bad well at least the starting chapter the whole tournement arc was meh. When you read something that says monster girl harem in the title and have an mc that proudly proclaim that he’s gonna make one in just the first couple sentences you have certain expectations and those have truly not been met. Idk maybe it gets better after chapter 40 (doubtful)

Ehh it was pretty good. But id have to be honest and say I didn’t really enjoy the mc overall personality I know about sentry and void and stuff but I dont know if that really meshes well with an erotic novel.

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Is there a reason why this guy that was supposedly trained by the goddess of wisdom is such an idiot?? I don’t know if there’s a reason for it but it’s quite grating to have to watch this dumbass so far and your grammar isn’t doing the guy any favors it’s possibly making him look dumber then he truly is I recommend you get a beta or you just go through your writing before publishing it cause there are a lot of mistakes. Ruins the experience

Does the mc change or does always stay so hero like because that’s fine once in a while but it get pretty cringy and annoying when he spouting bs about helping or something like that all the time. Could be just me but I guess it would be a lot nicer if he was a bit more neutral at least 😪😪

Lemons??

I wanted to ask if he ever tell his women the truth about himself because I think it pretty sad that he’d just be lying to them all the time I know I can read and find out but I just wanted to get a quick answer great novel btw I read the first couple chapters

Wish he would have had some more doubt about his situation he just kinda accepts everything for how it is it’s a bit annoying. The guys a completey normal person and he suddenly thrust into saving the world from demons… he ain’ got any issues I dont know about you but I would have a lot of damm questions