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Great premise and plot, but after a while I felt that everything was about dating dating SIMPS. After reading almost 200 chapters, I felt the story lost all progression and plot and ONLY was about dating and sex, so I dropped even when I have payed for alot more chapters. Great book for Yuri lemon lovers, but slow and stale for people that like story with a alot of plot and progression.

A good story for sure and the writing is excellent, but it is one og the slowest progression in a story I have come. A bit like reading the "LotR" books. 1 chapter of story, 3 chapter of explenation of the world and how thing works, and after 200 chapters I had to give up. I like the story and the MC, bit I felt the development of what i would call "the second MC" became too cheesy and OP and destroyed my immerson i felt for the main MC. Do not take that AS negative critisim, cuz the story and everything is good and Wells fleshed out, but after a while and how the character focuse devloped, it was not my cup of tea anymore. I like when i can immerse in one character. That keeps everything else more mysterious and thrilling for me.

Came in with big hope for a original cultivation novel, and after reading about 50chapter it somewhat is, but not to the degree i hoped. The world is like almost every cultivation story is. Writing quality is very good for webnovel and so far the plot is very catching. My problem is the MC and her companion. I had hoped for a story where someone would start out more robotic and trubles connection with emotion, but by chapter 10, the MC is already in love with her companion. From there the story takes a strange turne where everything feels like it's trying to rush in to a relationship and romance without building the characters one bit. Rushing for romance and lemons is the sad end for so many potential good cultivation novels.

I like the story so far and the story do not focus to much on the the female lead. That might be my problem with the story, also. so far as I have read, thr emperior malelear seem to dominate more of the developmet of the story and plot morr then the female lead as the resume would make you belive. But overall it is a good story and worth too read if you like the genere.

I am so happy too find a story with a badass female lead character with som far no romance to take from the story or the MC spotlight. very refreshing! keep up the good work!

A intresting twist of a plot and MC developmet. Would love to see even more psykologial developmet og the charcters. Keep up the great work and let the chapters keep coming!!!!

The story starts just fine and very intresting, but the Main character develops so slowly and every time she get and cool ability she Will never use it. When she gets cool items she gives it away. The things that made me give up after 400+ chapters is that the Main character seems to just get more and more stupid and have to have others fix her problems more and more and she do not have a goal or true focus on anything. (she gets a power that should make her the best trader around, but she do not use it when trading?)

i give up... story is somewhat good and the MC is intresting, but... I am so bored of all the genereic filler charcters that take over this story more and more...

Again, too little MC and to much focus on every other person om this story! You must change the synopsis to be about a gang of quirky cultivators who resives gifts from their leader (earler known as the MC). Do not get med wrong, it is a very good and unique story. But the focus of character is far worse then GoT... the MC is inn about 10% og this storys action and progression.

This story has a lot of good things going for it so far, and i mean alot! But my one big complain is that it is to laking on the focus on the MC. 80% of the story so far AS I have read is about other followers and random people.

i am at chapter 305 now and i like the story som far. It is very much a slow-burn bit that is not a bad thing, always. My biggest problem som far is that about 50% of the story so far is just long explenation og how shocked random side-characters are about what MC is doing or her talents. Sometimes it can be 3-4 chapters in a row just explaining how people Are reacting to a event that lasted for half-a-chapter. Not to say that I do not like the book (I do), bit sometimes there Are just to much random reaction, then action.

Really liked this story so far! Hope it Will keep updating and making good content. One of my favorite on this platform by far! Well done! 9/10 for a webfic!