AmunRa

AmunRa

2yr

Commented

Here comes repeat of dragon aura stone pillars

The second the stone tablet sensed his demon sealing aura, it immediately responded by trembling violently.

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

AmunRa

2yr

Commented

Make it a little easier for Victor imo, but then again I'm still interested in how you will play it all out. This is still one of the best stories I've been reading so far, and looking forward to how you will continue it

ch 233 Defeated

The Bored Immortal

Fantasy · Resurgent

AmunRa

2yr

Commented

You should have mentioned the name he was called during the times he died and started remembering his past. With how you wrote it, they will say his name is Victor which both werewolf and vampire clans will know is false. Unless you intentionally left it that way since at the start of the story you protrayed him as a warrior before losing his memories, in which case even though it's been thousands of years, someone should still remember his face🤷‍♂️

ch 233 Defeated

The Bored Immortal

Fantasy · Resurgent

AmunRa

2yr

Posted

So obviously a of negative comments, but the story isn't bad overall. It has good progression but author could explain some things a little better. Biggest downfall, is in the later chapters author just reuses/rewords the same action the MC/other characters do. Still ongoing and from what I've seen on other sites, it's pretty much the same thing. So not sure if author is having a hard time creating material or if it's just so that they can reach minimum words for each chapter. Honestly that's the biggest headache, reading the same thing 3-4 times throughout the chapter and in the end they've only done like 3 actual things throughout it. If it's a creativity issue then my recommendation is to just slow down on number of chapters per week. If it's cause they wanna be lazy and just use the excess as a filler to complete the chapter, then the readers that have made it to the later chapters will likely stop reading as well. Anyway, hope that bit gets changed but other than that I like the story so far

Journey To Become A True God

Eastern · DarkForces

AmunRa

2yr

Posted

so I don't normally do reviews or leave comments but this book so far has me hooked. I really enjoy how the author does the reincarnation and doesn't make the mc super op right out the gate. Can tell that mc will be op as story progresses and that there could be a few love interests in the future. really looking forward to how this story progresses, keep up the good work