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Honestly, I don't mind when a protagonist takes issue with fantasy slavery and tries to unexist it, especially when the slavery system is one of the more unforgiving ones that emulate slavery as experienced in our world. It can even make for an interesting arc where the protagonist frees an entire race of people and restores them to the power of a country, or at least gets the ball rolling. The main issue comes from when an idiot comes in and tries to screw with things without understanding or thinking through anything. Some authors really don't think much further than "Slavery bad, me include slavery, MC stop slavery, MC look good" and, while things like that have their place, that is a very boring setting to see repeated a hundred times over.
Yasenia nodded casually, "I don't see a difference between human and beast-people. Moreover, my lovers are human; you don't have to worry, mom. I will not act like those righteous heroes and try to change something impossible to change. I'm more curious than anything."
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
Sorry to comment on a 2 month old comment, but is there any real difference between Yasenia impregnating one of the girls and her getting impregnated by Andrea? Or is it simply that you don't like the idea of them having kids at all in the novel? I can kinda understand the latter, kids in amy series have a good chance of ruining the entire thing if not handled well, but I can't grasp the former.
Yasenia raised an eyebrow. "Oh… Then I will be able to get pregnant?"
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
Codependency can certainly be worrisome if not addressed properly. If she becomes like this every time they get separated there will truly be issues, both for Yasenia and her own cultivation(Yasenia constantly worrying about how Angel will feel if she leaves for training or missions or excursions and Angel likely forming heart demons over the, even if temporary, abandonments)
These two weeks without Yasenia have made her realize how much she loved her. Almost an unhealthy amount of love.
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
I'm sorry, but I just don't understand. Yasenia's mentor, who's name escapes me at the moment, said she wanted to let Yasenia feel frustration by failing to use the sword properly, but then Mason comes and she just...allows him to tell her? What was the point of her struggling for a week then? It's not like she felt all that much frustration, and it's not like there is much frustration to be felt from simply failing to use an extremely high level weapon with absolutely zero guidance or information on what mistakes she was making. It just makes it feel like Yasenia spent a full week making much lower gains training wise outside of comprehending her elements for absolutely no reason. Apologies for the long rant, it's just that this entire situation confuses me.
Yasenia looked inquiringly. "You are using the giant sword as if it was a normal broadsword. You are trying to add flexibility to a sword that has none. What are the characteristics of your sword?"
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
Eh, there are much worse things for one to be into. I should know, I'm the number one degenerate 'round these parts.
Yasenia retorted, "You want to see your lover having sex with another woman! Degenerates!"
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
Y'know, I can't help but doubt that considering the woman who has mastered the law of fate specifically gave you 5 "slots"
Yasenia interrupted and said earnestly, "I won't accept any more girls. You four are more than enough. I'm loyal to the four of you and my mother. Remember this, no matter how much I like another girl, I won't start a relationship with them. Unless something completely exceptional happens, I will have only the four of you."
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
People like this guy are what give harems and other such relationships a bad rep in novels like this. I get wanting to have someone that can increase your power easily, and even being aggressive in order to obtain them, but at a certain point you have to act like a reasonable adult right? Yeah yeah, might makes right or whatever stupid rule cultivation worlds have, but acting like this ruins the trust anyone has for you being a worthwhile individual/power to associate with.
Meanwhile, on the Academy grounds, Yasenia continued listening to Cecile's tale, "Even if a lot of people would be delighted of being part of his harem, my father didn't want me to be part of a harem with more than 300 women so he tried to resist… My mother, however, thought that it was my blessing to be liked by the king, so they had a fight. This happened when I was 12."
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
Honestly, it could be a lot worse. She and her family are dead, but she can still experience the world, even if only as a spectator, and she can take a bit of solace that she knows where her family is, even if they are only mindless thralls to be used for battle.
While the corpses in front of the undead raised, a single tear could be seen going down the undead's cheek. However, its body kneeled in respect and gratitude towards its eternal master.
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
Wait, was this originally posted on ScribbleHub? I actually came here from AO3 because I thought this was where the images were. Eh, too late to go back now, plus the comment feature here is easier to put my thoughts together anyways.
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Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
The aftercare segments are always so nice to read. Really sells that Yasenia loves her women dearly.
After that, she carried Angel to bed. She went back, cleaned herself, and went to bed. She didn't bother putting on their clothes. She used herself as a mattress for Angel and hugged her to sleep.
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
I love how you explain all of Yasenia's skills in depth rather than giving them a basic single sentence summary and then kind of making it up as you go like other cultivation novels. It's nice to have a very solid grasp on what a character can do with each increase in power
[Starry Sky] is a skill that can be activated. Yasenia will then create one star per second around her. She can fire these stars with two different attacks. [Shooting star] Let's Yasenia shoot a single star at high speeds and it will explode on contact! Yasenia can also release all her accumulated stars at the same time with [Starfall] However, the stars will have half the strength than when shot with [Shooting star].
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
Dao/Element comprehension/understanding/philosophy is always so cool to read in cultivation stories. It's interesting to see how the author explains the characters insight into an element, as well as the idea that 2 people can have the same element yet be capable of wildly different things
"If the sunlight illuminates our path through the day, and the moonlight guards us against darkness at night… The stars are our guides in life!" *Bang!*
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
Hands-free orgasms are perhaps the hottest thing in existence, and I will accept no other (wrong) opinions on this matter
Yasenia felt a hot liquid spraying on her waist and the trembling Evelyn in her arms. She held her more tightly and whispered tenderly, "Good job dear, I'm here, *kiss* I'm here *kiss*"
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
Things like this entire situation with Evelyn's parents are why communication is such an important skill to have in literally any relationship, let alone one as complex as having multiple partners. Sadly 98 percent of people in cultivation novels that aren't a few millennia old have the communication skills of a particularly rusty fork.
Evelyn continued with a brittle voice. "This resulted in a fight, n-not a v-verbal one *Sob* and because my father d-didn't want to *Sob* harm me, he held back and got *Sob* crippled by my mother and her new partners."
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
Evelyn's dedication to breasts is one that I hope to replicate someday. Truly a messiah of culture
Yasenia remembered, "Is he the boy who you were harassing before the second part of the exam? "Evelyn shouted with righteous indignation, "I was not! I am a lover and fan of big ti-" *Bang!*
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
I love it when cultivation antagonists do absolutely zero research on whoever they're going after. They really picked the one woman in the school with a technique that, at minimum, has to do with the sun and moon, and they pick the time where the sun is at its strongest. It's like fighting a water cultivator in the middle of the ocean at high tide.
Not to mention others being scared, Lucinda that was in the middle of that aura was starting to sweat buckets! But believing firmly in her previous thought, and because of the constant pressure of Yasenia's aura, she accepted "S-sure! Tomorrow at Noon I will see you in the arena!"
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
I love when characters eyes change colors with emotion. Or just characters with unique eyes in general. They're some of my favorite fantasy tropes
Yasenia's pupils thinned into a vertical line and the red color grew inside her irises thus making her gaze become extremely murderous, her voice started to be accompanied by a growl "Do you think that I'm someone easy to bully?"
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
I will never understand some of the people on this site. Why would it be a big deal for the harem members to sleep with other harem members? This is the one thing that has always confused me about Webnovel commenters and is why I usually wind up turning comments off while I read. I would ask the person in question but I'd rather not Necro a year old comment thread. Also, sorry in advance, author, if my comments from early parts of this story will be spamming you, I like leaving my thoughts while I read sometimes, even if the story is rather old.
Yasenia this time was truly stumped. Did she care so little about her lover having a relationship with other people? Seeing her face Andrea laughed "Don't misunderstand, I am accepting because two reasons. First, the girls or boys, of your harem won't dislike my body because... Well, if they don't mind about yours, they won't about mine, right?"
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
This is the one thing that always bothers me when I try to read this series, and is why I have to keep restarting. I love everything else about it, but the fact that Yasenia always thinks she is being "unloyal" when she thinks about dating multiple people just makes me feel weird, especially since she isn't being unloyal if everyone in the relationship is happy and consenting. I just hope someone tells her that in the future of the story.
Yasenia looked down and thought 'I think I should be honest with her. If I can't be loyal, at least, I will be honest and never lie to any of my… potential partners. Even if this results in regret… I rather trust and regret, than doubt them and regret it later.'
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo
Who doesn't appreciate some good Oyakodon? Anyone who can't understand it's greatness simply has no taste.
Tatyana put on a sadistic smile and looked at the others. "Complete degenerates, they want to taste the mother and daughter at the same time. Truly sinful~."
Heaven, Earth, Me
Fantasy · Mortrexo