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Negary? What's that from?
*Race Skill: Viral Slash (I) - Enables the ability to create and secrete virus.
Villain: Ultimate Mutation System in the Alternate World
Urban · InnocentFox
"yet" What a horrible word to use! 😱
Knowing what to do, Morgan calmly looked at the eleven Ascended who had not been taken by the Gate Guardian yet and called:
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Yep
That, too, was more easily said than done. The Nightmare Desert, after all, was vast. And full of all kinds of horrors.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
[Fated] rn
It was so tiring, to always have victory slip through his fingers at the last moment.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
The dialog here is horrible. Who is saying what??? As a reader, I have no clue which parts are David talking, Lova talking, or Sterl talking. You need to do something like, "Hello," DAVID SAID.
ch 10 The Blood Mist Guild! The Threat of Professionals
Awakening：The Infinite Evolution of My Talent as a Low-Level Awakener
Fantasy · Whisk92
I agree. Change Mastery to Advanced
By the way, the proficiency system in [Transcendence] is divided into five levels: Beginner, Mastery, Expert, Master, and Enlightenment.
Awakening：The Infinite Evolution of My Talent as a Low-Level Awakener
Fantasy · Whisk92
"Upgradation" isn't a word. If you're making this word up to try to make "upgrade" sound cool, stop it. "Upgradation" is cringe and lame. "Evolve" is probably the best word to use.
"Upgradation!" he would command in his heart.
Awakening：The Infinite Evolution of My Talent as a Low-Level Awakener
Fantasy · Whisk92
"How dare you claim that I'm no taller than an ant!!"
Sunny, meanwhile, was a young man of a rather modest stature.
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Fantasy · Guiltythree
Mixed with this!
Dire Fang's Dormant Ability enhanced all his senses, especially his hearing and the sense of smell. He could even feel the tiny vibrations spreading through the ground… as a result, he had no blind spots. He also seemed to be able to predict the actions of his opponents by observing the tiniest changes in their stances, muscle contractions, eye movements, and other things Sunny had no knowledge of.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
This!
Dire Fang's Dormant Ability enhanced all his senses, especially his hearing and the sense of smell. He could even feel the tiny vibrations spreading through the ground… as a result, he had no blind spots. He also seemed to be able to predict the actions of his opponents by observing the tiniest changes in their stances, muscle contractions, eye movements, and other things Sunny had no knowledge of.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
We're blasting off again!
It was as though Sunny's soul was bleeding.
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Fantasy · Guiltythree
Morgan rn
No matter how amused and curious she was, now was not the time to engage in these kinds of emotions.
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Fantasy · Guiltythree
Save yourself!
"But I have more than thirty-seven with my grandparents."
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter
Rey applied the [Greater Warrior's Mantle] to buff himself, while also increasing the intensity of the lightning formed by his [Greater Lightning Magic] Skill.
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter
You use "unhurriedly" a lot. Use slowly, leisurely, lazily, and nonchalantly as well to give a better variety of words that basically mean the same thing without sounding repetitive.
Opening his eyes, Leo stared above, at the wooden ceiling in daze for a couple of minutes before unhurriedly standing up... exiting the wooden house as he gazed at the horizon in deep thought.
Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
"Do you want me to tell you the story of how I met her mother?" George opened up.
Villain: Ultimate Mutation System in the Alternate World
Urban · InnocentFox