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Okay, I cleared my cache and see the changes.

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The Devil's Betrothed

The Devil's Betrothed

Fantasy · Mynovel20

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Not sure but you may need to delete one of the two last sentences or modify it to say something like "Then a thought crossed Arlan's mind but then quickly left," something to that effect if the last sentence is supposed to be reflecting that the thought just as quickly left Arlan's mind.

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The Devil's Betrothed

The Devil's Betrothed

Fantasy · Mynovel20

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Exactly

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"Well, we are in the human realm and it would seem weird if a human saw a talking horse." She said, smugly. 

Mated To The Cruel Prince

Mated To The Cruel Prince

Fantasy · Glimmy

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*new boots

"And I, a new booth," Lillian requested. She giggled afterward, excited at the thought of adding new footwear to her collection. 

Mated To The Cruel Prince

Mated To The Cruel Prince

Fantasy · Glimmy

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I know, right? I mentioned that before that Aldric had been bombarding this girl with having her survival instincts triggered and she keeps choosing non-self preservation. First time, understandable but little psycho has been leaving bread crumbs all over the village and forest and she just refuses to acknowledge them.

As if he sensed what she was thinking, Eli met his gaze and a shudder went through her. There was no way that innocent face could be anything more. But then, the Fae creatures were also the beauty that lies. Yet, it didn't make sense that Eli was a Fae and stayed by her side all this while without killing or enslaving her. Even if she found him in the woods close to the divider, Islinda was conflicted. 

Mated To The Cruel Prince

Mated To The Cruel Prince

Fantasy · Glimmy

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I'm sorry, what is the point of survival instincts if she is just going to ignore them? Eli/Aldric has been giving her fight or flight signals since meeting him. Probably should listen to those.

"In that case, thank you for looking out for me." Islinda easily believed him, reaching out to tousle his hair and the young boy gave her the brightest smile that could even shame the sun. Islinda did not think about the look she had seen in his eyes when she awoke thanks to his good behavior, pushing them to the back of her mind. 

Mated To The Cruel Prince

Mated To The Cruel Prince

Fantasy · Glimmy

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Funny, that is the rule yet you have Isis and her cronies breaking it left and right at record speed.

"The same rule applies to her as well, even though she is my daughter. This is the secluded life I chose for myself," Solarius replied. "Moreover, isn't it against the heavenly rules to look into her life in the mortal realm?"

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

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"I know, it was a brutal punishment he decided for himself, but that is how he is. Instead of celebrating that precious moment of his own child being born, he was here to accept the punishment," Solarius' gaze turned emotional. "A punishment, even the most powerful deity can hardly bear one-fourth of what he endured. Each thunder strike gets powerful than the previous one as more the person endures it."

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

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Dray would rather be and act human to preserve the humans than abuse the power that Eberus can provide. Evanthe instilled that into him. Now, keep allowing Iris to mess with his honeybun especially he finally got that honey out the pot and all bets may be off.

"I understand this concern as I was the one to make him take those oaths," Solarius interrupted him. "If something disastrous has to happen, you can trust Him to protect all the realms once more. The heavenly realm does not have to panic about a young Dragon being born. He was certainly aware of what he was doing and would never put all three realms in harm's way. Moreover, that young Dragon is his own blood, and I believe he must be as righteous and selfless as his father when it comes to power."

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Fantasy · Mynovel20

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That or it was his promise to Evanthe when she was younger to have a son just like him, hence Drayce.

Solarius hummed. "He said there was someone to whom he had once given his words, and those words held equal importance to the oath he had taken with the heavenly realm. He would not go back on the words he had given to that someone."

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Fantasy · Mynovel20

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Okay, looking forward to that part of the story.

One of the deities stood up. "Supreme Lord, if this is true, what do you plan to do? How are we going to protect the heavens against Him?"

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Fantasy · Mynovel20

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