Well.. Hopefully that memory fragment can help him recover something... He is basically crippled at this point. No system, no power, no bird.. It almost feels as if this part of the story will get dragged out from this point.. I really hope something will change.. I'm tired of this weak and powerless MC who can't do anything on his own.
ch 112 Chapter 112: If you're grateful
Fantasy · Revonne
Honestly.. this chapter felt weird. I lost some respect and like for Tian for going along with this. It's one thing to be cruel to others, but in this situation it felt uncalled for. Also, Lingxi is better than Ziyu, so why release her, knowing she will leave? It feels totally random and uncalled for tbh. Doesn't make anyone look cool, and only adds humiliation.
ch 232 A desperate love!
Eastern · Akkuzz_69
Myeah.. So now, he even lost the system. Good job, the worthless guy became even more worthless. He can't even descend his own mountain now.
ch 111 Chapter 111: The Impossible Selection
Fantasy · Revonne
The fights seemed too blown out of proportion and dragged out. Rather than writing so many chaps for such simple fights between toddlers, you're better off condensing them. The main issue is that they're too long. The second one is that MC spent 2 chaps in same fight before even using any skills, instead of focusing on finishing things quickly. He was against 2, and he wasted time and stamina in a forest of monsters... just to drag time. Should have used his skills from the start and went for finishing blows, not jump around with a sword and an axe. You're writing fights between rank 0, 6 year olds man.. How fun do you think those fights can be? Focus on the plot more and advance time, don't drag things in first 50 chaps with fights between toddlers.. spent 4 chaps on it too.. As if it were some final villain arc... nobody actually cares about 6 yr olds fights, we want things to advance.
ch 71 Bringing out the Axe!
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Pleasee.. they're not even rank 1.. Exagerating much?
Her body froze, unable to move an inch as overwhelming fear engulfed her mind. She trembled uncontrollably, helplessly watching them move their hands in unison, delivering a tremendous blow. The air crackled with energy, the ground splintered, and a deafening roar filled her ears, drowning out her scream. Each of the twelve warriors struck with the power of a falling star, their blows converging into a single, devastating impact that shattered her defenses and hurled her backward, her body crumpling like a rag doll.
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Really?.. He attacks the tip of a sword with his palm?... How stupid is this?
She didn't understand what he said, but it was too late to back out now. Time seemed to slow down for both of them as they locked eyes. Oliver extended his palm towards her, meeting the tip of her sword. Everything seemed to slow down at that moment before their eyes.
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
A shorter chap with more dragged out content. Truly a waste of money like others say. It's not even interesting.. just pathetic fights between 6 yr olds.
ch 74 Fighting with wounds! Time to test that out...
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Check all the biggest serial killers known, and you'll see a correllation between their behaviour and their pasts. Most of it comes from trauma. Rather, there are very few who just decide to do it. Idk where you took your info from, maybe you should read some actual books cause what you said invalidates human psychology to the fundemental level. They gain pleasure from it, but what causes them to do it is the need for control or other things that they lacked. That seed is planted from childhood. You really don't understand human nature, i can tell from your mindset. It lacks depth and maturity.
ch 12 Step-mother 3
Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69
He is basically forcing himself on others, constantly.
The anti-hero is the one who is neither villain nor hero. He is most neutral type, not abusive or violent, mostly uncaring and selfish. And technically speaking, most serial killers were abused in their childhood. Most of villainy comes from abusive childhoods, idk where you got your info from, but people don't randomly commit mass murders just cause they feel like it. Also, any being can have redeeming qualities, even Bundy had his charm. What you're creating is an absolute garbage being who finds pleasure in bringing pain, regardless of who it is.
ch 12 Step-mother 3
Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69
Those are part of the Vampire lineage so he cannot add any of them. He is stuck to low level human bloodline, so none of the bloodline abilities will be recovered.
Of course, abilities like Absolute Kinesis and Absolute Step still wouldn't be included since they would only be unlocked once he becomes a Great Sage, not that it would change anything. Nux could always add them once they are unlocked.
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
Hmm..somehow i'm sensing a separation between jeremy and his 2 girls soon? The ring seems to convenient to hide from his enemies or infiltrate them.
ch 58 Water of Life, The Sacred Artifact is Mine Alone
End of Days Game: I'm the Only One Who Can See the Hidden Cues
Fantasy · BWbear