Aizetra - Profile

This is a good story, wonderful world building and lovely characters. I love that this is a good amount of chapters instead of the 300+, 500+ or even 1000+ chapters! I can appreciate the story more because of this. However, it needs some serious editing. There are inconsistencies with the sentence and paragraph structure. And a big issue is the wrong pronouns getting used is so consistent. I feel if people are paying to read the chapters on WebNovel, authors need to make some effort on this part for the readers as this will elevate your novel as which it deserves!

An amazing and fast paced novel! Love the characters and the progression of themselves and their abilities. Some very cute behaviour in between the chaos 🥰 One minor thing is that is that some chapters need proof reading for some spelling and vocabulary but is easily to read past this still. Can't wait for the next part…hopefully won't have to wait too long! 😁😍

Suspenseful, gory, comedic and smutty. Love the psychopathic MC and the build-up of the scenarios with the other characters. These instances are well thought out and look forward to future updates.