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鉁岋笍

First of all, I would like to thank akshit_gupta for giving his own view of my novel and I will try to better my writing in the future.

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in chapter 4 You should have given a background of MC before transmigration. By reading I know He was some powerful being but I don't know anything about how strong and how does he so many authorities.

Before I begin, a reader's comment brought to my attention of mistakes in the previous chapters. Although I didn't find a mistake there, I did, however, find a few mistakes that I fixed but no doubt, there might still be some.

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didnt have to mention M

Seraphina. The girl who suffered. In other words, a perfect example of an M, only she doesn't enjoy it. But that's for later. Right now, let's see what those old men want.

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all you have is*

"Currently, all you have I insubordination, and because of that, the imperial family won't march over to your land. But the moment your affairs with the church are exposed, you will become a rebel."

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Display rank also with numerical values

My status had changed a lot. My physical stats were still at only D- rank but the INT stat was in the ranks of C.

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No Prince will do that

I returned to the slums and embedded the board on which I had written my resume in the ground. It simply read, "Free treatment of any curable disease."

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You abruptly shifted the whole situation. After his sinister smile in last chapter I think you should have explained some details about how he died. I know you will explain it later but this seems an abrupt cut to me

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