I am nothing. I am no one. I exist to witness. Rules I follow none.
*heavy spoilers btw* *Warning: most of this are my personal opinions* -The novel idea and lore is good. -The writing is good but could need better explanation and smoother actions. I need to process the actions between paragraph sometimes. -The story get real weird after the auction house chapter(22+). There are sudden unrealistic romances, sudden mysterious organization etc. -The solutions sometimes feels too plot-armored like having 600 years old mom. -The MC has severe trust issues and PTSD but not enough paranoia and too clueless about the world. She also turn cold blooded from not wanting to kill pretty fast. super unstable. -The MC somehow has quite a lot of rich young master friends. -The city lacked security even in a technologically advanced yet devastated world. 600 years are really long ya know. That's all I could think of for now. Awaiting further developments. Overall I'm giving it 4 5 3 2 4 respectively for a total of 3.6/5.
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Webnovel
*heavy spoilers btw* *Warning: most of this are my personal opinions* -The novel idea and lore is good. -The writing is good but could need better explanation and smoother actions. I need to process the actions between paragraph sometimes. -The story get real weird after the auction house chapter(22+). There are sudden unrealistic romances, sudden mysterious organization etc. -The solutions sometimes feels too plot-armored like having 600 years old mom. -The MC has severe trust issues and PTSD but not enough paranoia and too clueless about the world. She also turn cold blooded from not wanting to kill pretty fast. super unstable. -The MC somehow has quite a lot of rich young master friends. -The city lacked security even in a technologically advanced yet devastated world. 600 years are really long ya know. That's all I could think of for now. Awaiting further developments. Overall I'm giving it 4 5 3 2 4 respectively for a total of 3.6/5.
The Rise of Quetzalcoatl
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