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Moonrose_13

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2021-08-18 Joined Global

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gods! the exclamation mark

"Indeed, the Midnight Inn is not on, or anywhere near Earth. In fact, we are not on any planet, and our purview is not any single solar system but the entire universe!" Lex paused to let Marlo absorb what he was saying. "We accept guests from all over the universe, and provide services that they can only dream of! Naturally, an establishment of our size also leaves small tokens of fate across many worlds for those with the strength to seize them!"

The Innkeeper

The Innkeeper

Fantasy · lifesketcher

Moonrose_13
Commented

so many exclamation mark

The biggest shock, however, was received by Bastet and Falak. When the wave of spirit energy entered the Inn, it wasn't spirit energy that entered their bodies, but a higher and more complex form of energy! Bastet, who was asleep, woke up to a feeling of horror and excitement! Excitement, because she had instantly recovered enough to where she could leave Earth immediately on her own, and horror because she knew all too well what level of power that energy represented. Falak, likewise, knew what it meant and immediately stood outside Bastet's room, awaiting his mistress' exit in case she needed him.

The Innkeeper

The Innkeeper

Fantasy · lifesketcher

Moonrose_13
Commented

Sunny vs. Mad Prince Jet vs. Undying Slaughter Mordred vs. Soul Stealer ??? vs. Dread Lord ??? vs. Torment ??? vs. Devouring Beast just a guess

Sunny had to destroy a dire enemy — the forces of Defilement populating the corrupted city of Verge and the Six Plagues that ruled it. Dread Lord, Torment, Undying Slaughter, Soul Stealer, Devouring Beast… and Mad Prince. 

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

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Commented

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"Are you sure about that? Whenever men see me with her, they actually want to kill me and take her for themselves."

Dimensional Descent

Dimensional Descent

Fantasy · Awespec

Moonrose_13
Commented

The reality of the world.

It was Leonel's fault. Had he not been unreasonable and caused so much chaos, the Adurna family would have never grasped the chance to enter the Zone and their team would have been whole and complete. But, because of his own selfish desires, he actually caused the death of so many.

Dimensional Descent

Dimensional Descent

Fantasy · Awespec

Moonrose_13
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to the author~Hi! Hello! I just want to say you should not overwork yourself. I know that there is a quota for writers like you but ease up a bit.I want to tell you that your story is great. It's one of the few stories that got me hooked immediately after just one chapter. The composition of your words are astonishing. The way you write, the grammar, the narration of the the story is truly amazing. You can easily tell which is which when when its POVs are switching. Unfortunately, really, I notice that your writing style change a bit - just a little bit - after you gave those bonus chapters. I tried to not mind those changes but it's piling up. I'm sorry I can't help it. The essence of the story, the thrill it gave to the readers is slowly getting less and less. Sure the fighting scenes are awesome, I'll give you that. But the mysterious effect of each word, the trick for each sentences so that it can use the loopholes can be visibly seen by someone like me whose slow to understand what is being implied! That being said the should not be named are getting named! The 'if he just saw this and that' and 'the like this and the this like that'!Plus the chapter is getting shorter compare to first tens of chapters. 😭I'm sorry.As I was saying, you don't have to do those many chapters if your getting stressed and crammed for it. Readers are contented if they get to read to the next chapter and their expectations are met and frustrated if not. That's the life of readers. I bet you already know that. So think about your mental health and how it affect you. I just wish that your writing style get back to how it first been. Thank you Good luck ~

Moonrose_13
Commented

he's crazily talented

"For now, he seems to be a good choice. He's only sixteen, so his age matches the under 25 requirement from seven years in the future. Still, let's see how he performs in the test first. After all, he hasn't measurably passed the previous tests. I can't tell yet whether he really has some talent or if he's just crazy."

Death... and me

Death... and me

Fantasy · Suiyan

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Commented

you have a point

"As I said before, life is going well for us vampires, and if we wish to keep it that way, then we need to protect ourselves. As we have grown stronger and gathered more resources, there will be those that will wish to steal what we have."

My Vampire System

My Vampire System

Fantasy · JKSManga

Moonrose_13
Commented

ahh not good. please don't hesitate you'll be killed if you do that

She thrust the spear, but pulled back at the last second, letting the tip only slightly touch the man. His whole body was lighting up, but she needed to hold it in place for a few seconds before the man would pass out.

My Werewolf System

My Werewolf System

Fantasy · JKSManga

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Replied to Daoist652285

sauce pls

[Those marked due to a Forced Bond will be the first people to be targeted during a full moon.]

My Werewolf System

My Werewolf System

Fantasy · JKSManga

Moonrose_13
Replied to K_Log

thanks much

Tristan sighed, looked at the tallest boy, and said. "Okay, I will now call you Rugrats 1." He looked for the second tallest child and named him Rugrats 2… He repeated the process all the way by their heights up to the two female children named Rugrats 6 and 7. After naming them all, Tristan realized he forgot about the half-unconscious boy, but he didn't want to go through the trouble of naming them again, so he named the last one Rugrats 8.

Blood Elf Monarch

Blood Elf Monarch

Fantasy · Avan

Moonrose_13
Replied to K_Log

movie?

Tristan sighed, looked at the tallest boy, and said. "Okay, I will now call you Rugrats 1." He looked for the second tallest child and named him Rugrats 2… He repeated the process all the way by their heights up to the two female children named Rugrats 6 and 7. After naming them all, Tristan realized he forgot about the half-unconscious boy, but he didn't want to go through the trouble of naming them again, so he named the last one Rugrats 8.

Blood Elf Monarch

Blood Elf Monarch

Fantasy · Avan

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Commented

adoptive father

The sight of Layla firing shot after shot at the targets reminded Tristan of when their cop stepfather show them how to use guns just to show off his power and intimidate them. Fortunately, now it has become a useful lesson.

Blood Elf Monarch

Blood Elf Monarch

Fantasy · Avan

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Replied to Aushin

maybe they remove or forbid the use of it when relocate to another planet

What the man had shown him was a completely immersive VR game. One where you would put on the headset and your mind would be transported into that world. It was a technology the vampires already had and would use it for training themselves.

My Vampire System

My Vampire System

Fantasy · JKSManga

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