I find the family's treatment of the MC very hilarious. Despite the reprimand, he has great family support, which is very good. Furthermore, I can see a great merit in Kayden recruiting all the "extras" who have a great force to make up his militia. It's very smart and out of the box.
ch 10 What Happened?
Fantasy · EgoForge
Thanks for the chapter.
ch 31 Plot Manipulation (3)
Fantasy · Smle_v2
thanks for the chapter.
ch 30 Plot Manipulation (2)
Fantasy · Smle_v2
Author, I noticed that your new work has gone offline. I tried looking and couldn't find it. What happened?
ch 30 Reunion of Two Crows and One Cat
Anime & Comics · WeighingSwing_35
Thanks for the chapter.
ch 19 A lonely World
Urban · 50_PERSAINT
Thanks for the chapter.
ch 0 9 Pirates and a Heart broken [4]
Fantasy · EgoForge
Author, I have some questions regarding a wizard and an "artificial" wizard, who needs a ritual to have mana like the MC. Do they have vital differences?
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I have read the work so far. And for now I have no regrets. The author is laying good foundations and I believe this novel really has a future. I just hope there are more updates, keeping the immersion. I believe that with more chapters there will be a chance to make a proper critique.
ch 0 7 Pirates and a Heart broken [2]
Fantasy · EgoForge
Thanks for the chapter.
ch 29 Plot Manipulation (1)
Fantasy · Smle_v2
I'm actually liking this mini arch in the white room. Kind of a breath of fresh air for what's to come. And there was a lot of relevant information about the MC. I think the Author was very happy with laying Kai's foundations. A sentient blade with a really cool name (yes, I loved the name haha), and an adorable wolf... I think it's a very complete team in my opinion, with room for another adorable familiar. Furthermore, the MC has a foundation to be very powerful, as well as a lot of room for psychological growth (the most important thing in my opinion). Who knows if one day Kai will become a God of souls? it would be cool.
ch 122 Stored souls
Fantasy · Kerplunkered
Thanks for the chapter.
ch 14 Chapter 14: New Class [1]
Fantasy · avbutt
Now, it really seems to me that Celestin really knows about the various timelines... In addition to having a plan in place and caring a lot about the MC. Well, him knowing too much kind of loses its appeal a little. As for Arthur and Dominic, their friendship is really comical haha.
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I agree. Only if he had a hidden agenda so as not to interfere unnecessarily in the timeline, due to the butterfly effect. But then the plot would get too complicated and honestly, something simpler would be better.
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Name for the next chapter: "From the fifth to the first"
ch 127 Working 9 to 5
Kaiser of the New World
Fantasy · Kerplunkered