IndigoLion

1yr

Replied to IndigoLion

Right forgot to add that I REALLY HOPE its not gonna turn into a kinfrom building type novel, mc should have companions but I don’t want him to have a whole 1000 people following him

Undying Warlord

Action · HideousGrain

IndigoLion

1yr

Posted

Ok, to start, I’m Addressing The reviews others made about the pushover and nanny Mc. Believe me, it might be annoying at first but in like 10 chapters it gets much better. Right now I have read 100+ chapters and have really likEd it. However, there are a couple of oofs that turn me off a bit. + Action scenes are amazing Abilities and world background Is compelling Even if mc seems op sometimes you can see that he’s A frog in a well at some moments. Other good things but I’m Too lazy to write - First off, I don’t Like how he’s Been stuck in an itty bitty town for so many chapters, I want him to move on and explore the world, there is bound to be a LOT more interesting things. Second, I feel there is TOO much emphasis on r***. Like I get he wants to make rules and not allow those bad things to happen, but like there’s A reference to what happens to someone who r**** like every other chapter, it gets too repetitive considering he hasn’t Said anything about other things like people bullying or taking advantage or other things, he can’t control everyone. I feel like I’m the portal mini arc he progressed too fast, like a few chapters and he maxed every stat and basically just has to farm LOTS of monsters just to get the occupation Again, I hope he moves on fast, it’s getting really boring in the same place. But I lIke the book :) [img=update]

Undying Warlord

Action · HideousGrain

IndigoLion

1yr

Replied to Ricardo2

Remember When he was impaled by a tree in the beginning And almost dead. The “system” transferred That struggle into a regeneration Ability :) and ofc the mc has to be special duh

-Origin ability-

Undying Warlord

Action · HideousGrain

IndigoLion

1yr

Commented

Dude stick to one tense pls, I’m Already getting headaches from reading this. U switch from past and present every paragraph.

All around him were three gorgeous, naked girls who were currently sleeping while their soft breath tickled his skin. All of them each have their own distinct beauty, which is not inferior to one another.

Young Master in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Avan

IndigoLion

1yr

Commented

I don’t Get it, why did the mc get so angry when his friends died. I assume He has seen them die multiple times since Even if they get killed they can not die if they have a certain amount of coins. So they weren’t Really dead just alive in the real world ?

This book has been deleted.

IndigoLion

1yr

Replied to lifesketcher

Thanks man I realized a bit later. Really loved the book, keep going. I can’t buy Chapters :(

During the tour, when they entered the restaurant, he saw three people sitting at a table being served food by a young lady, discussing in great detail about the history of some place called Vegus Prime. He instantly recognized that two of those people were in the Qi Training realm, but the third man gave him an oppressive feeling like he'd never felt before. Without any doubt Hugo knew this man was the strongest being he'd ever met, but he was just sitting casually eating what looked like a Spinach dish with some Naan. A part of Hugo told him that this was all an illusion, that the Innkeeper was still trying to fool him, but a much greater part told him that he was not qualified to be fooled by such a man.

The Innkeeper

Fantasy · lifesketcher

IndigoLion

1yr

Commented

Wasn’t He a cat, how is he a man now?? I’m confused Or is this the bull that . Idk man explain ple

During the tour, when they entered the restaurant, he saw three people sitting at a table being served food by a young lady, discussing in great detail about the history of some place called Vegus Prime. He instantly recognized that two of those people were in the Qi Training realm, but the third man gave him an oppressive feeling like he'd never felt before. Without any doubt Hugo knew this man was the strongest being he'd ever met, but he was just sitting casually eating what looked like a Spinach dish with some Naan. A part of Hugo told him that this was all an illusion, that the Innkeeper was still trying to fool him, but a much greater part told him that he was not qualified to be fooled by such a man.

The Innkeeper

Fantasy · lifesketcher

IndigoLion

1yr

Commented

Bro these plot holes, he can only see a meter around him but he saw the large building stretching for miles???

It was a huge and magnificent structure that was so wide that he could not even see its ends that seemed to stretch for miles.

Odyssey of the Blind God

Fantasy · HideousGrain

IndigoLion

1yr

Commented

How would he know that if he only had a meter of perception bruh

Additionally, there was also the Slime Boss that was approaching him from the deepest parts of the cave at a fast pace.

Odyssey of the Blind God

Fantasy · HideousGrain

IndigoLion

1yr

Commented

Bro what, he felt the journey. Wack…

But at the same time, Nial felt as if it was also the start of a journey that would be filled with adventures, joy, but also pain, sadness, and numerous life-threatening dangers.

Odyssey of the Blind God

Fantasy · HideousGrain

IndigoLion

1yr

Commented

What about ancient, divine, god

Rating: Legendary]

Nameless King

Fantasy · Arlemit

IndigoLion

1yr

Commented

Common system hosts? So there’s More systems on this planeat?

-The average Distribution of common System hosts on this planet is between 1-3 stat points. This Host's Distribution is a Benefit from the Deity Odin.-

The Over-Break System

Fantasy · ScotchTy

IndigoLion

2yr

Commented

Wasn’t He only able to communicate with one person ata a time. How can he hear the thoughts of thousands of ants?

Their mad, vicious thoughts screamed inside Mikael's head.

Death Ascension

Fantasy · Tiene_Lass

IndigoLion

2yr

Commented

If he can make golems, why would shubs need the dwarf for it?

subclass - Golem maker(due to retaining its knowledge from its previous life, it is capable of making golems)

Crazy Necromancer in the Ruined Tower

Fantasy · Twilight_Lord

IndigoLion

2yr

Replied to Twisted_bird09

BRO WHAT IF NOOOO WAYYYYY

My Dragon System

Fantasy · JKSManga

IndigoLion

2yr

Posted

How are u gonna use berserk as ur book photo lol. Hdgdikwbduejdbehe eueiehdheudjdbduejeheijdhdiebdiebsidnssisnisnekekskdbeiejndidndeiendirnddj

Ranker's World Online

Games · Jigx

IndigoLion

2yr

Commented

Why always 7?

After reciting the incantation, Klein closed his eyes and repeated it seven times in his heart.

Lord of Mysteries

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

IndigoLion

2yr

Commented

So he gets payed to work for only 1.5 hours and he gets lessons and sleep too. Wow

With that, he began a simple but regular lifestyle. He would spend half an hour in the early morning Cogitating. He would have two hours of mysticism lessons in the morning and an hour and a half of studying the historical documents. After lunch, he would take a short nap in the break room to regain his energy.

Lord of Mysteries

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

IndigoLion

2yr

Commented

The tense changes Every dIff paragraph -_-

He was amazed at how this town could probably be a real town in the countryside minus the swords and wands and the occasional magic that some NPC's release to show off. Adrian could even smell the scent of the food that is being sold in the food carts and he was even tempted to buy one just to try it out. Unlike the modern city that Adrian is living in, the town of Genesis has a quaint feel in which you would miss it after you have visited it.