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too long of a build up, inconsistent grammar, MC has a weird mindset, odd s**ual assault bit added in, cliche after cliche. I don't know what I'm reading sometimes.

not well thought out at all, childish mentality, lack of common sense, it feels like a random 13 year old got isekai'd and slapped with a system that carries him. Supposed to be a "genius weapon designer" yet completely relys on the system for everything. Uses his weapons, as well as a caveman, would use a rifle as a club. Act's like a scared coward at the first sign of danger unless he has his system OP cheats. If this guy didn't have his system he would have died unknown somewhere after he got transmigrated.

Had a childish tone but wants to portray a badass mature protagonist, the style of writing doesn't fit the book and way too many cliche's. Background is subpar with typical predictable settings and history with things just falling into the protagonist hands when he wants it, walks home sees perfect member, walks around finds perfect base and fighters. Things don't work like that unless the "system" is involved but the author tries to pass it off as natural. tldr: this book is a misfit of ideas in one.

dude. name copywriting is a big thing. its just clled trademark. Business names, product names, logos and labels can all be trademarks. You acquire a trademark by using your mark in commerce—in other words, using it when you conduct your business. This applies to movies and related franchises.

selling chapters on webnovel with copyright names would count as copyright infringement. this is illegal

eyo wtf why does my main comment have 3 likes but my replies only have myself responding with 28 likes... something weirds going on here webnovel almost like *cough* *cough* deleting comments

absolute s**t show of a novel. supposed elite "trained from childhood of a hidden hundred billion company" yet he's 25 making worse love choices than my 13 year old sister in middleschool. man get cheated on so many times but his "hardened on the battlefield ruthless a**" lets go of the woman every time or responds midly. every hundred chapters theres mutiple instances of him being cheated on. the worst part is he never acts ruthelessly or uses any of his supposed power really. this book could easily end in 30 chapters if anyone with half a brain was put into those situtations instead of him.

Whatever floats your boat ( ͡° ل͜ ͡°)

If the author ran with the whole "Bc he's undead he hates living things" trope from the start, maybe it would have fit better. But the problem is the author decided to make him an ordinary dude (band player or whatever) and because he died to some terrorists in the final moments of his life, the author twists it to become the sole reason he hates humanity with a passion. Like it's just sloppy writing at this point, he could have written it as maybe a celebrity getting unfairly ostracized in his career by the general public and because of that gets dragged through the mud for years before taking his own life, or a world-class researcher who was helping fight a super virus for the world, only to meet his unjust end through greedy politicians who twist the narrative into having the general public hate him, dying in his last moments hating the very people he tried to save who didn't even bother to look deeper into the politicians lies, etc. But I digress, anyway the point I'm trying to make is such instances of weird twisted logic in the story break the immersion and ruin the quality of the story. TLDR: Fire breathing dragon is cool and makes sense but "because a man died of overly hot, hot sauce causing him to breath fire as a dragon in his next life" is just kinda weird. For your second point about how because he is an undead now and feels no empathy etc, that's a cool and nice genre and I'd love to see more but the problem with this one is the author has a fetish for humanizing the victims that just make this story too much for me, I already went over this in my first review and i'm not saying he should become the protector of a village, or save every tom dick and harry he comes across, the author just goes TOO far in the opposite direction. You could argue maybe some people like reading about him killing random humans he comes across and i'd say fine I guess that's ok, but humanizing every person is too much. It's like having a documentary play about cruel chicken farming conditions and the suffering they go through in their poor 3-month life just as your trying to eat some goddam fried chicken. There are more points I could make but this comments getting a bit too long. TLDR: There are plenty of ways to make the MC kill humans but the morals and logic here kinda scuffed. It's like reading a war novel where the authors trying to have you root for the Germans in WWII where they get oddly specific on each atrocity committed making this kinda the NTR of Undead category, just TOO far for me. *But some might like it ._.