from these first 7 chapters i gotta hand it to ya, these were great! i sets on a new, unique direction that is rare among the bleach fanfics I've read. Nice pacing, Good and easy to undrstand dialogue and a new take of zangetsu. i'm loving it! hope you can continue the good work, author-san...... and hopefully kubo-sensei grants you the rights to bleach.
ch 0 7 Chapter 7 – Confrontation
Anime & Comics · Royalmv
ahh this is such a good fic!! it definitely deserves a lot more recognition! keep up the good work author-san!
ch 35 Chapter 34: The plans of Mice and Men II
Anime & Comics · MoonLight18
remember, your dream is to be the future number 1 hero. i know there's still more character development waiting for him around the corner, but I would be pleased if his brooding and naive personality be polished out soon because it's starting to get annoying
I noticed Cathy has her quirk constantly activated making her super enhanced to match the same level as Rumi who seems just as strong as my Uncle at his current strength. His strength has been reduced a lot since his injury from All For One, I've considered trying to heal him with my flames, but a small part of me blames him for my parent's death and wants him to have that injury as a reminder of his failure. Just like I assume my scar is a reminder of that moment too.
Anime & Comics · Anomander_Adaar
hmmm idk how to feel about this. On one hand, It's only sensible that he's going to heal him later on, but from what I've read so far and the general direction this fanfic is taking, I think that he's going to try to heal him when he finds out the injury is slowly killing all might, but for whatever reason he can't heal it.
I noticed Cathy has her quirk constantly activated making her super enhanced to match the same level as Rumi who seems just as strong as my Uncle at his current strength. His strength has been reduced a lot since his injury from All For One, I've considered trying to heal him with my flames, but a small part of me blames him for my parent's death and wants him to have that injury as a reminder of his failure. Just like I assume my scar is a reminder of that moment too.
Anime & Comics · Anomander_Adaar
well yeah, but i suspect for him to have some semblence of rage and reason to end Aizen right then and there
"Kurosaki Ichigo..." muttered Aizen, prompting the orange-haired youth to ask, "What's going on here...?" with a neutral mask that belied his extreme confusion. He had just spent the past 2000 hours unlocking a power that would allow him to strike down Aizen in his 'transcendent' form, but when he arrived, he found his greatest enemy and rival fighting each other like a pair of street toughs...
Anime & Comics · Einlion
of course! we need to have some setcbacks for the mc After a huge(not so huge) battle like that. Umu, no complaints here, None at all!
"I'm certain that won't be necessary," mused Kisuke, regaining his usual 'mysterious' smile as he looked at the Djed symbol on Ohta's forehead and added, "Rather, as far as I can tell, it appears you've done a number on yourself. I'm guessing that seal is a side-effect of utilizing a power you weren't prepared for...?"
Anime & Comics · Einlion
while i quite agree with author-san's statement, as a fellow bleach fanfic enthusiast, i could understand where the frustration is coming from. I think the cause for them to be displeased is because of how it ended, by aizen getting sealed. now i bet that most of the people that reads this fandic had read other bleach fanfics in the past. And in most of those fanfics, they have the aizen battle end in the same way, by way of sealing him. Now the author might have some future plans for Aizen or maybe he/she just don't have enough care to kill off aizen idk, but to us readers. .. most of us would've probably liked to have the battle end in a different fashion. I mean it did get hyped as this high-stakes, everything is on the line battle. Maybe aizen getting killed? Maybe him fleeing from the scene to recuperate and plan his eventual comeback? Maybe just something.... different? it makes the whole prospect of ohta being introduced in the story a bit, with all due respect, pointless. while i and all the readers know that he has a major role in terms of how he effects The social aspects of the story, But this battle just makes his training/struggles and conviction of defeating Aizen once and for all feel quite unappriciated. But that's just opinion, i mean no offense
ch 96 Desperation
Anime & Comics · Einlion
true .. . honestly idk why i commented on this. Just wanted to say sonething ig
(A/N: There are no true victors in war...)
Anime & Comics · Einlion
we'll see if it was the best when seireitei gets murked by the quincy. you weird/annoying bucket hat-wearing candy man
Furrowing his brows, Ohta briefly shifted his gaze to Kisuke, prompting the pale-haired blonde to smile and shake his head, mouthing the words, 'This is for the best.'
Anime & Comics · Einlion
bruh and ichigo literally just wasted mugetsu
Staring down at his Zanpakuto with a forlorn expression, Ichigo revealed, "You're not the only one who went to great lengths to prevent Aizen from triumphing. I fused with my Zanpakuto in preparation for one final attack. Once I end my transformation and return to normal, I'm told my Shinigami powers will disappear completely..."
Anime & Comics · Einlion
bruh the fact that ichigo could've just sliced aizen in two right then and there, but nope he just stood there, confused, while he could most likely see how powerless aizen, it makes me both exteremly infuriated, but it's also such an ichigo/shonen protag thing that i can't fully berate it
"Kurosaki Ichigo..." muttered Aizen, prompting the orange-haired youth to ask, "What's going on here...?" with a neutral mask that belied his extreme confusion. He had just spent the past 2000 hours unlocking a power that would allow him to strike down Aizen in his 'transcendent' form, but when he arrived, he found his greatest enemy and rival fighting each other like a pair of street toughs...
Anime & Comics · Einlion
BROO hahah! Aizen's just there like " I, who have spent countless years perfecting my plan, going through every possible scenario, predicting every possible outcome, Scanned through every possibility to the most trivial of hinderences. FOR I WISH TO STAND ABOVE GOD. To have my plans foiled, utterly ruined be the likes of YOU! YOU, who have no ambition, you who ignore the potential of your power, YOU WHO COULD'VE STOOD ABOVE THE REST BUT DECIDED TO CONFINE ALL THAT POTENTIAL IN THE NAME OF BLISFULL IGNORANCE . WHAT RIGHT DO YOU HAVE TO TRAMPLE ON ME AND RECEIVE SUCH POWER?!?!? !" Ohta:.. Cause I'm HIM
Realizing what was happening, Aizen groaned, "This is impossible..." as his eyes widened. He believed that he had subjugated the Hogyoku and gained insight into the 'will' slumbering within. However, at its core, the Hogyoku was a construct that responded to the will of 'everyone' around it. With Ohta willing to stake his existence, the Hogyoku couldn't help but recognize his 'conviction.'
Anime & Comics · Einlion
you think you could fool us with such petty titles? we've been here for the ride mr. snolly. trying to give us hope that there will be a shred of happiness in the near future? Even a blind man can see through your act.
Next next next: Daphne was in love with me?
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
i gotta give it to ya Mr.snollygoster, you really know how to rile up the readers
"AXELTINA SHIP SAILS!"
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
author: *sees a potential scenario in which Axel could be happy and be rid of self-doubt* author:Oh no... let's throw some PTSD in there Axel: *falls in despair and self-loathing for the 100th time* author: nice.
Axel went to sit on his bed. "Go away, Martina. And tell your mother to quickly do my wand. Then you won't have to see me more."
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
so chizuri and orihime are lovers now?
ch 167 Pregnancy Hormones(During Ch 135:EE)
Anime & Comics · Teloch
how about instead of hp, the cast goes to the world of magi(the anime of course). the world is just so awesome, and I just love the power system. the cast would be considered strong but won't be downright op, so they will still have to face challenges and learn new powers (such as magic and making contracts with jins). it would also be in line with the whole mc being an all powerful being, because in magi there's a literall enemy in the later chapers who is basically God and you could utilize that as a way to realize the a part of the mc's hidden power. and also fate and destiny is a big part of magi so I think u could maybe use that to flesh out the reason for the mc's reincarnation and his destiny. this world, In my opinion, would give a lot more creative freedom on where you want to take the story.
ch 0 1 My X-Gene...
Anime & Comics · InGlorious
this disease is what we call a 'plot point'
He had done everything within his power to make his grandma proud, but due to the unknown disease that plagued his body, he would often lose consciousness even if he was just standing still.
Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate
Fantasy · Elyon