Tyler isn't a man. He's a little boy holding onto his daddy's apron strings. Also this is why you should never, ever, have a child with an abuser. They will use your child to hurt you and abuse your child. I hate hate hate society's views on safe and effective birth control (abortion) because it's the only thing that protects women from men like Tyler's father.
ch 37 Chapter 38
Fantasy · Caroline Above Story
I'm so confused. Ethan is a doctor, why isn't he doing anything to prevent pregnancy? Do the police not exist in this world? Even if his family hates him, if he gets pregnant, it's still his baby and it's not that easy to take a baby away from someone who's competent.
ch 37 Chapter 37
LGBT+ · Jenna_Marie_Sabino
The MC is pretty cool so far.
ch 0 3 Only human
LGBT+ · precious_pruddy
Dead people don't care about what people think of them.
ch 250 The Fox can't defend himself
LGBT+ · ThirtyTyrants
Why is there suddenly the dumbest romance I've ever seen? We don't even know the difference between lycans, werewolves, and hounds at this point. No world building or mythology has been established. We don't even know who these characters are. Why am I supposed to care about their romance? This is just bad writing.
ch 29 The Werewolf Warrior [2]
LGBT+ · she_osprey
The pacing is so ssssssssssssllllllloooooooooowwwww. I feel like I should know more about the world and the plot by chapter 25. I feel like I'm still reading a prologue. Who are these people? What's happening in the world? Why do I know absolutely nothing about the mythology and setting after 25 chapters?
ch 26 He Started It
LGBT+ · she_osprey
Because being that obsessed with someone is incredibly unhealthy. Even in a world with fated mates if you invest yourself so heavily into someone else you will lose yourself, making yourself a less valuable partner. A good partner isn't someone who's obsessed with you, a good partner is someone capable of being your equal and supporting you. The MCs obsession makes him less than and opens him to abuse, which the description states will eventually happen. He's also a child so this sort of behavior will have long term effects on his development. Obviously he needs therapy and his family is neglectful for not getting him the healthcare he needs to develop into a balanced, healthy adult. It doesn't fit into the story so I understand why it's not happening in this fiction but that doesn't make it any less true.
ch 0 8 The Fight In The Woods
LGBT+ · AuthorWissal
Dude just attacked and almost killed the man's boyfriend in front of him and then says he's never done anything wrong in his life? Maybe if you want to have a relationship with someone you should start by saying "Hello" instead of assault and attempted murder. Alex did nothing wrong, I wouldn't want to be with a violent psychopath who uses violence to get their way either.
ch 11 My Mate Rejected Me
LGBT+ · AuthorWissal
This boy needs therapy.
ch 0 8 The Fight In The Woods
LGBT+ · AuthorWissal
I was trying to suspend my disbelief and enjoy this story but come on... In the beginning of chapter 1 the old money millionaire 70 year old grandmother bedazzled her car. I'm not joking, 300,000 glass crystals were put on her car. Rich people don't bedazzle their cars. That's something poor people do with their tax returns. Then the MC decides to give her new fortune to her husband in chapter 5. Her husband who makes her sleep on a cot in a study. Her husband who doesn't like her enough to consummate her marriage for 5 years. Her husband who never stood up for her, not even once (in chapter 4 the husband tells her to go to her room and she says that's the warmest thing he's ever said to her). Her husband who's rich but made her publicly beg for money to care for his own servant. She decides to stay with this man and devote her new fortune and life to him even though he's not done a damn thing for her for all 5 years of their marriage. Maybe she'll bedazzle his car for him next.
The Heiress Strikes Back
Urban · Give Me Buff